Reviews for Shinako 幸
nagel123 chapter 1 . 7/16/2019
...me gusta...me gusta mucho... espero con ansias una actualizacion.

Psss me encantaria ver como desarrollarias un OC en el clan nara ...sin dudas mi clan favorito junto con el aburame
RyuukTheHatter chapter 1 . 3/24/2019
Its interesting. I would love to see what the next few chapters will be like.
Chikamikirai No Subaki chapter 1 . 11/28/2017
I like your idea but she could be smart enough to skip a year and end up in neji's year and take Ten-ten's spot on team guy. I feel that Ten-ten doesn't really have much place in the story plot
Seyuuu chapter 1 . 10/20/2017
Having her be Kakashi's apprentice and be a part of team 7 might make her a bit mary-sue. You could have her be apprenticed to another jonin and have joint practices with team 7 is another idea. Or you could have her "replace" Tentens place in team 10 which would be less marysue but still replacing a canon character. A good question to think about might be is this going to be a team7 oc centric or just a oc centric fic. I'm looking forward to how this turns out! Can't wait for another chapter, it will be great believe it!
fightingstoryaddiction chapter 1 . 10/9/2017
shivers no no no wouldnt want to be her butttttttttttttttt if the option was to be shinos twin or say like like a certain snake sennins twin ids belike hello little bug boy brother yes bugs are so lovery but not but better than snakes shivers no ugh no can u image orocchi as your twin u would have to fake your death before becoming a ninja and get out of the elemental island and move to a far far far away unknown island and like after all that naruto drama happens and orocchi is good which i dont believe he is but he is back in the konoha forces working with them no to sure if he really is good cause that dude is coocoo but id still stay hidden away in a unknown tropical island but no naruto world is dangerous and scary and just to many wackos fun to read and watch but be in ah no awesome story so far looking forward to reading more u take care
Shewolf chapter 1 . 9/15/2017
I would love to see Kakashi train Shinako when she is ten years old. I think the pairing should either be Shinako/Gaara or Shinako/Neji because of her disdain for all things bright, happy and loud, I can't see her with someone like Kiba or Naruto. Please update soon.
time-twilight chapter 1 . 9/15/2017
Looking good so far.

I think it would be good if Shinako becomes an apprenticed to Kakashi when she is 10 years old, Kakashi can teach Shinako how to use a sword type weapon, he cab also teach her how to have a good sense of smell and i think kakashi should train her with light weights on so Shinako can run fast without the weights on, but not too fast.

Will Shinako be a chunin by the time team 7 is form, so when team 7 joins the chunin exams it will just be naruto, sasuke and sakura in the exams as team 7, because with Shinako having an adult mind I think she should already be a chunin by the time team 7 is form.

At the moment I'm not really sure who Shinako should be paired with in the future, cause I don't know what she is like personality wise, but I can name a few males characters that I think she should be with and when I read more chapters I will be able to pick out of the characters so here are the ones I think she should be with:
Gaara
Shikamaru
Neji
Kiba
HeadInTheClouds EyesToTheSky chapter 1 . 9/7/2017
So, with kochu Shinako will fit perfectly into Anbu or undercover ops.
I'd vote for her to apprentice to maybe someone from ino's clan or someone who specialises in infiltration missions (Kakashi might fit too?).

Then a pairing from outside Konoha? Like, the relationship develops first while she assumes a different persona, it gets out later, drama, reconciliation/or whatever? Angry "I still haven't forgiven you trysts"?

Regardless, my favourite pairing for her would be... hm, - nah, no idea.
But no one from the Konoha 12 or Akatsuki...

Looking forward how she will "add" to the verse.
calcu22 chapter 1 . 9/6/2017
I do like the idea of her graduating early and haveing Kakashi as a sensei. However i am always wearily of four (five if you count kakashi) team genin. More often then not it feels weird with what we know of canon. Of course if you have a good explaination as to why then go ahead.

I really like this idea and I am interested in where you'll take this story.
Owlgirl chapter 1 . 9/6/2017
Shibi seems to be a bit ooc for an Aburame. Apart from that, promising first chapter.
kumbrakarna chapter 1 . 9/6/2017
interesting bug choice
FarFromTheSun chapter 1 . 9/6/2017
Can't wait for your next update! :)
0SomeoneStrange0 chapter 1 . 9/6/2017
Well this is interseting. :3
CasJeanne chapter 1 . 9/6/2017
I like it and your ideas
Amatsumi chapter 1 . 9/5/2017
Will you following the Canon plot or like other adventurous fic deviate from Canon heavily?
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