hello may i have more

The chapters could be a bit longer. Given how small the two chapters are I find it odd that you haven't updated in over a year. Have you stopped working on this story or something?

This start with how bad this story starts'

1-Minato just drops Naruto off. With no backstory whatsoever. Like really that's not how you start a story. Not like that.

2-The overused cliché. The first being the abandonment or neglect for his sibling or siblings. The second being the idiotic mob trying to kill him due to the fox attack. And lastly him gaining a bloodline due to said mob or from some kind of shock.

3-The overall pacing of the story. So much is just left unsaid. Has this happened before? If so why hasn't something been done in the past 5 years?

4-The mob being killed. I have seen this done like 100 times. It's just lazy. Even if the mob was about to kill him ANBU goal should be to subdue them not kill them.

This story has a lot of work before this is even an ok story that said if done right it can still make for a nice story. Just fill in some of the past 5 years. Why he has the Sharingan or whatever it is Naruto has?

you need to update in both Wattpad and here

It's a good start you can build the story from here quite well. keep going its interesting to the say the least

A blonde Uchihas? If he has awakened his sharingan this young should that give him an advantage?

Why is the story so good this is too little

nice so far

I like the story but it has some plot holes that can be filled with backstory and a lot of flashbacks

I have to say this story has alot of flaws one being the overused story ideas the other being the speed of the story so i'm guessing this starts on the day of the attack then jumps years to an attack that just happens. Why is he being attacked? How does he gain a clan bloodline out of nowhere? Why would the 4th hokage just drop Naruto he isn't the kind of person to do that unless his wife had something going on I fail to see the logic in this.

Overall not a great start to a story however it's just starting so I'll hold out hope that this can find it's way otherwise you may want to try working on the story a bit more before posting any new parts.

I have no problem with your idea,on how you make your story,and how you do it, because you are the author and i respect that ,but this lacks more sense on how did it happen, in my opinion. I am not saying that you should stop doing this, because this story has already my interest and i intend to finish reading it until the last chapter. So that means that your story is great, i can't wait for more, keep it up,and Thumbs up to you, which was my review to this but i don,t know to the others.

Naruto is a twin here right? Got it. Cliche number three at least. But! This one is explained. I'm not sure how you're setting it up, but Naruto ISNT Minato's child, obviously. He's part uzumaki and part Uchiha illegitimate child right? There are (not actually) twins who don't share the same parent at birth. You'll need to explain why Kushina cheated with someone though. Seriously, I'd like the backstory on that. Minato figured it out at some point (chakra/ blood test for disease..) and dumped the child who wasn't his? You'll need to explain why the kid isn't in a foster home or claimed by the Uchiha themselves. They did have some egos, understandably.

Provided Hiruzen(and the reader) isn't filled in on those little details until later because of clan politics, I could see this story going somewhere. Slow start and magnificent finish! Magically obtained sharingan and being abandoned without reason isn't a great start though. On the rewrite, put Kushina's abduction or whatever that back story is first. Sets the reader up for tension and intrigue.

Alright, so this is basically Naruto with the sharingan (an overused concept) combined with Naruto neglected/abandoned in favor of his sibling (also overused). Two overused concepts together do not make for anything original. But whatever, if done well, those can still be good stories.
So, Minato basically abandons Naruto, which makes no sense. Hiruzen says how dissapointed he is ... in the most cliched manner ever.
And we skip ahead to Naruto being chased by the mob, with the ever classic screams, written all in upper case letters, obviously to empasize the yelling, even though an exclamation mark would be perfectly enough. To make it simple, an angry mob is an overused an horrible cliche. It is illogical, ruins charachter development, ruins the universe, reduced villagers to angry morons and is just plain lazy. The story that didn't start out all that great instantly dropped in quality.
And then Kakashi, Itachi and Shisui slaughtered the mob ... effectively killing off people they are sort of supposed to protect. Umm, even if they were in the wrong, simply slaughtering them makes that trio basically criminals, considering that for a ninja that all situation could've easily been solved without lethal force.
Of course as the result of the ordeal Naruto gainst the sharingan or something close to it. Obviously. I mean really, did the mob exist for any other purpose than to allow Naruto to unlock some power of awesomess. Well I guess their only other purpose was to get slaughtered.
Add to all of that horribly rushed pacing, relatively simple dialogue, lack of details and descriptions, abuse of capitalization and we get a rather horrible start for a story.
The structure is decent though, I'll give that much.
So overall, the idea is not new, but it can work. But for it to work there has to be effort. A ton of it. Even the idea is new and original it still requires much work and effort, planning, proper implementations of concepts, charachter portrayal, detalisation.
This, so far lacks in that. I do not see much effort put into this. Sorry, just my opinion.