Seems like there's alot of the plot still unexpossed. I won't pass judgement just yet.

Very nice, to answer the question at the bottom of the review page: The guyver unit takes all it's nesesary energy from the host, thus the host's cells can barely function, let alone multiply. The unit however, prevents them from dieing, so they don't divide, damage is instantly repaired, and thus the host doesn't die or age.

!Please finish this i have to know what happend

I really love the story line. I am waiting for the next chapter please write it soon. I love the introduction of Guvyer3 being alone but there to help out and put a serious hurt on Chronos.

This was much better then your Tenchi fic. Still way too short though I hope you finish this up as its off to a pretty good start. 7/10

not bad...one question tho...how the hell were sho fukimachi and agito makishima able to live until AC-195?

unless they went into cryo sleep, it would have been impossible.