| Reviews for A Bartered Betrothal |
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   Lorelei Candice Black chapter 1 . 6/23 I loved it. Nice one shot, really. Good job. |
| glo4twilight chapter 1 . 7/24/2019 Oh i absolutely loved this. Rough start but perfect ending or beginning. It seems edward was lonely too and bella filled that space. |
| debs2crazy chapter 1 . 5/10/2019 Cute story. |
| Lilypad10 chapter 1 . 2/20/2018 love it! Loved it! |
| Lanna chapter 1 . 10/17/2017 So lovely...happy tears here. Thanks :") |
| pipelynn chapter 1 . 10/15/2017 I absolutely loved this! wasnt sure how you would be able to wrap it up by the end and its perfect! |
| JessaCloud chapter 1 . 10/15/2017 Beautiful story. So well done. I was gripped from the very beginning and absolutely loved every moment. Perfection. |
| Bella M Riddle chapter 1 . 10/15/2017 Oh this is incredible! You really manage to capture the era in this story. Even in a oneshot, their relationship had a slow burn quality to it and I enjoyed watching it unfold. Lovely story! |
| FanNan46 chapter 1 . 10/14/2017 What a wonderful story - loved it! I work in Charlotte NC so I kept trying to picture this place in the 30s. |
| BeautifulRainne chapter 1 . 10/14/2017 Wonderful story. I think you were able to capture exactly the essence of the story within the word limit constraints beautifully. I have seen many reviewers say they wish this to be continued - I think it is a perfect and completed one-shot that can stand alone on its own. If it were to be continued - I would rather see it expanded upon within the story already written - not continued from this point. Home run on my score card! |
| carina2026 chapter 1 . 10/14/2017 I'm not sure how I missed this one, but I loved it! |
| midnitereader chapter 1 . 9/30/2017 This turned out differently then I thought. Who knew Edward, with his gruff demeanor, was actually in love with Isabella when he offered to marry her that day. He knew her father wouldn't just accept his offer of marriage. Edward had to make a deal, one he knew Mr. Swan couldn't turn down. Once married Bella did her duty. Perhaps if Edward had romanced her she would have felt differently for him. Perhaps not. Edward didn't know what he what he was doing, He didn't know how to make his wife fall in love with him. Once they figured things out they had a happy loving marriage, thankfully. |
| Elise de Sallier chapter 1 . 9/28/2017 Thank you for this lovely story. I wasn't sure how it was going to turn out, considering their horrible beginning, but Edward well and truly redeemed himself. :) |
| EVK70 chapter 1 . 9/28/2017 :-) |
| Gaby-wotnow chapter 1 . 9/26/2017 What a lovely story. You brought everything together nicely. Loved it! |
