This is PAINFULLY bad!

I like this story but it has a few problems, mainly small spelling errors which doesn't really bother me. But

Spoiler Alert:
You have Harry squash a reporter and then she still writes articles in later chapters.
I think there was another thing but I don't really want to go through the story again to find it.

Muchas gracias por terminar este fic. Saludos

México
9 julio 2020

That was great I enjoyed reading it.

Wait I thought Rita Skeeter died in her animagus form

ummmm... didn't rita skeeter die in one of the previous chapters?

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Awe shit man I smell like whore.

Oml fuc yes please yes Oml yes yes yes i absolutely loved the fact he started to reveal his further knowledge with spells because aurora - fuck if i spelled that wrong, in his excitement without realizing it i love that it makes me jittery best stories

I have the burning feeling that this will probably stop being updated at the end leaving a cliffhanger which i hope to merlin note, but its happened so many times -3- also ravenclaw i love it so much i dont think ive seen someone do that before in a fanfiction. My edgy horny side wants me to skip ahead but alass i wont but also i will stay away from that till theyre atleast like- idk 16 17 because what you gon do- its fiction

Thank fucking god you made that large furry adorable half giant oaf be good. I love hagrid he is baby

it's a bit sad you set him up for slytherin so quickly, i mean all he'd known till that point was gryffindor which obviously would make the decision harder, he'd had YEArs to reflect on what happened but gryffindor had a lot of good memories with it. changing his colour scheme is just so out of the blue, pun intended i'm not far but i do hope he has to think REAl goood in which house he wants to be placed in since ol singing magic mind talking bitch boy kinda- let him choose.

i forgot to mention how smart it was with him getting exausted when using his magic, i mean he doesnt even have a wAnd uWu it'd only make sense that he'd get tired if it's not channeled i guess you could put it~ PLUS he Big BAby BIG

Omfl YES his aunt, dare i spell her name for lord forgive me i'll get it wrong. i understand this so much and it makes so much sense. his aunt really loved the wizarding world as a kid but with her sister being the only witch and she a muggle she got jealous quickly. she tried to avoid everything witch and wizard related and forced her sister out of her life with that same jealousy, she tried to seem normal so she ended up marrying that git vernon which was fine with her, he, vernon was a fat lump of flesh and a mean one at that, after she introduced him to her sister and james they hated each other. which eventually grew on pat- so when harry came she was disgusted. but seeing as he introduced the concept of magic earlier in this timeline and got her used to the idea again, but in a gentler way because she already kind off expected this she, what im guessing accepted the full thing earlier. cant say the same for the other twats. and with harry being a 17 year old trapped in a 6 year olds body im guessing she felt a sense of security or familiarity, someone she could finally get along with that wasn't over overbearingly annoying or boasty about their opinions. someone she could finally have a cup of tea with and sit down chatting about how to trim prim roses in the winter as to make sure they don't die. sorry this is a ramble i love this writing! ALSO omL thats a lot of pounds! he's good at acting LOl, my brother will probably love this because they hate albus's guts and would in my opinion be the perfect example of a modern day death-eater.

Didn't Rita die in ch 37?