Reviews for Another Path
Belladonna The Narrator chapter 28 . 7/30
Takeshi maybe... He actually got introduced in canon when he was committing suicide right? That is an idea, Ienobu being an assault and meeting Takeshi like that, just about to kill himself...
Salestia chapter 28 . 7/27
I’m actually hoping Hana is next with her common sense
BoyishBlue chapter 28 . 7/22
HAHAHA! I was thinking of Hana cause she should be knowledgeable about what's happening in Namimori to defend Kyoko right? Putting Hayato in place of Tsuna on Haru's prince charming fancies was kind of weird and nice at the same time. Hayato can be worshipped a little and be praised for being good, something he didn't really have a luxury before he met Tsuna's group. In a way, it feels right. I hope they solve the case immediately. Even if Mukuro has powerful illusions, I don't think he can keep it up for them to go unnoticed. And nope. I don't want an Ienobu and Nana encounter. They can have Iemitsu all they want. Such family members they are (note the sarcasm).
MysticRising chapter 28 . 7/21
I'm happy you returned to writing! I like the story quite a lot. And speaking of asshole twin fics, I think I saw the fic that inspired the story, but I gave up when it was revealed tsuna forgave his brother as it quote on quote wasn't his fault he acted that way, it was because of how Nana raised him. It basically absolved him of all fault. I'm okay with redemption, but that wasn't redemption. Before redemption there must come penance, so I hope that Lenobu suffers if he ever gets redeemed (or just suffers in general. Mehehehehe, hopefully whoever targeted the Vongola heirs kills him off too. Mehehehehe)
I think Takeshi would be great to introduce instead of Ryohei, or maybe kyoko/Hana, but Hana is too confrontational so I think Takeshi would be a better informant seeing how he would take it all as a joke. I can imagine he overheard something but thought it was a game and believes Haru is playing the game so decides to play with them or something based off his weird logic.
As for Ryohei, I saw a fic where he was basically owed a debt and forced to help criminals, so I think it would be interesting if he fights for the criminals because they threatened to harm his sister. If I remember that's why he got his scar years ago as well, to protect his sister. This would introduce some very interesting dynamics and give Ryohei something serious to think about. He also usually takes it all as a game like Takeshi, but I would like him to be hurt by how grave the situation is and heal with Tsuna's help.
hellfire45 chapter 28 . 7/20
Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next
Fenrirwulf chapter 28 . 7/20
I think it Yamamoto if haru is visiting people or Ryohei since he like to run around town anyway.
Golden feathers Edward chapter 28 . 7/20
Sorry to hear you lost the original chapter but glade you have the drive to continue! Good luck with your next chapter! X3
Nemhain2009 chapter 28 . 7/19
;P
Static2000 chapter 28 . 7/18
My guess is next would be Kyoko.
Aruka Zoaldyeck chapter 28 . 7/18
next character appearance might be kyoko and hana.. or better yet yamamoto takeshi
Mistletainn chapter 28 . 7/18
Why just temporary? I'm fine with Hayato x Haru. He needs all the affection he can get. Also, she'd be a good way to keep Bianchi away. Hayato might not have been abused as much as Tsuna, but he sure got plenty.
Guest chapter 28 . 7/18
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I LOVE THIZ. What would happen next tho? Some yakuza attacking kyoko with ryohei coming to the rescue or takeshi's father being attacked? Yeaaa. Im excited for the next chaptet
mmacdonald22 chapter 28 . 7/17
Love the chapter! I was thinking maybe you’ll put Ryohei next since he was supposed to be in this one! Or has Dino arrived in Naminori yet? Hope you have time to update soon!
Guest chapter 2 . 7/17
This fic reminds me of to that faraway sky by cwycross
primera solitario lobo chapter 28 . 7/17
Is it going to be Fuuta or Takeshi? Reason being the yakuza are targeting shops and Takeshi's dad owns a sushi shop. Also the yakuza are backed by a mafia family, probably a small one like the Todd family, the same mafia family that was chasing Fuuta in canon khr.
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