I want to see what happens next!

Yes plz make a part 2 it would be so awesome

Yes :)

Part 2!

Squee!

Wow! What a story! I enjoyed reading it. This chapter almost made me cry tears of joy :') I enjoyed reviewing! Hope you write more stories!

This story makes no sense and it’s not formatted correctly even though it’s good

Awe I can't wait for him to say how pretty Violet is.

Wowimhavingsuchahardtimereadingthisbecauseyourformattingisinneedofseriousworkifyoucantunderstandwhatiwroteherethenyoushouldhaveanideaofhowharditisforustounderstandyourwriting.

Wow. I'm terribly sorry to say this, but your formatting needs some serious work, since I'm having a very hard time with reading your story. There aren't any paragraphs; just a big, imposing wall of text that gives me a headache whenever I try to read what you're writing, as well as tons of run-on sentences. Turrislucidus posted similar comments of her own, in case you haven't read them. Please make sure to heed our advice, as well as the FanFiction dot net guidelines for your future works, okay? We would all benefit from less eye strain while reading.

Is that the end? If it is, I liked it!

Nice chapter! Also, why does it say complete when your still updating it?

This wall of words, it's all a blur, I can't make out a thing;
The thoughts herein, will stay hidden, for lack of formatting.
*weeps copiously*

Ooo that’s interesting room is Charlie gonna get his eyes fixed or something more sinsiter

Gosh. I wish I could read this :—D