COME ON, WHY DOES IT HAVE TO STOP?! REEEEEE

This is a pretty cool story. Interesting concept. Hope it continues

This was such a wonderful read, please continue to write it. I can’t remember the last time I enjoyed a story so much. I absolutely need chapter 4 as soon as possible!

This story is fun and well written! Keep writing

This shit is absolutely fantastic. The writing, the plot, the characters. My one negative I would have is . . . . why would Neo just randomly give this to a kid in the street. There has to be some kind of drawback to this, perhaps you can reference the TV show Limitless with its pills? I think that plot point would be fantastic

Anyways, I'm freaking loving this and I'm so annoyed that there are only three chapters.

I love the idea for this it happens to work with Jaune really well and Roman goodness is always good. I hope you update more frequently :)

Lol wow very funny

You did a great job writing this, man(or woman, idk). Are you gonna write a Chapter 4?

Honestly, when I saw this in my story tab I was so hyped. Love the crossover. Hope you write more if real life permits

This is amazing! Absolutely brilliant! I just want to binge read this when all’s said and done.

Man I'm really hoping Roman is genuinely helping Jaune be a better person just because it's his duty and not because this is all some elaborate scheme to take advantage of him.

Is Roman really just a system? Or will it come out to fight for the body in the future?

Nice

Great fic, can't wait for more!

I'm glad other people had the same "Squip-ify Jaune" idea. It gives me an excuse to put off fearfully writing my own fanfictions.

Good stuff so far.