| Reviews for A Loud adventure |
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   kitehaseo chapter 8 . 2/27 I have read this story form the start and can say I didn't think that would happen have enjoyed the story hope it continues eventually I really want to know where this goes next. |
| Phillip Craig chapter 8 . 4/7/2019 so what happen next in chapter 9 |
| 87crazytaxi chapter 4 . 3/6/2019 Damn this is intense |
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/26/2019 I liked these chapter I hope u post a new soon |
| Vallisi Malgov chapter 1 . 1/13/2019 Lmao lisa was the only person in this whole series that hzs good grammar did you do that on purpose lol |
| JohnMonty chapter 8 . 10/15/2018 It's about time you updated this story! I've been waiting forever! Sorry bout your grandma, that's tough. Hope you update soon and that your doing well, I eagerly await the next chapter I can't to find out what happens next! |
| IAmTheMeta24424 chapter 7 . 6/27/2018 Wow Lincoln just fucked 6 of his sisters and it seems lola and lana are next keep up the awesome work |
| JohnMonty chapter 7 . 6/27/2018 Great chapter! Hope you continue the story and update soon! I want to read him doing the twins, hopefully Leni, links and Roxy aswell in the next chapter! Keep the chapters coming! |
| agui972 chapter 5 . 2/28/2018 NIce story you made though some things could be improved like, Have spacing for different character’s dialogues, bit hard to read a paragraph that gives a rushed feeling to the story. Second Is the summary no one likes a author who puts themselves down, gives the idea you won’t improve and/or won’t continue the story. Have an actual summary that catches a reader’s attention and makes them want to read the story. That way more people will see it and want to read it and give you details on how to improve. Plus change the title, it’s so... dull. Like the summary it needs to catch the readers attention get the interest of them. The story is interesting and would like to read more and see what you can do to improve it. |
| JA32 chapter 5 . 2/28/2018 I wonder how this will hold... its a double date and Lincoln is dating the oppsite gender of himself! Kinda shocking he's focus on the date but less on finding a way back to his dimension |
| The PhantomHokage chapter 2 . 8/24/2017 Nice chapter can't wait to see more |
| The PhantomHokage chapter 1 . 8/19/2017 Interesting beginning can't wait to see how things will go and all who will get involve with Lincoln I kinda hope Luna is one of them |
| dopehope chapter 1 . 8/18/2017 It's pretty good story to start off! Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work! |
