Reviews for Mellow Yellow
charlieboy chapter 1 . 12/27/2018
I like how you tied off the relationship of Alan and Vanessa. It seems the women come and go in this Series! Not to say the part they play isn't important, it is. They all have left some sort of a foot print in this show.

Cute interaction between Denny and Alan. I can imagine Denny helping himself to Alan's potatoes!

Thank you for sharing this!
ASuDC chapter 1 . 8/28/2017
…this was a great story, too :)

Gosh I love it when Denny “steals” his husbands mashed potatoes from his plate and Alan is complaining about it. ;-) Wonderful and funny written scene…especially when Denny told Alan about the woman that looks familiar to him and when she headed in his direction asked Alan if he still has spinach in his teeth ;) Typically Denny believes that the woman will come to him :)

Alan was candidly delighted to see Vanessa Walker again and vice versa. Too bad she cut her hair…her long hair was so beautiful. Anyway it was great to learn that she is now married…good for her ;) The whole conversation between Alan, Vanessa and Denny was very lovingly written…well done!

It is so great that you know Alan and Denny to a T…Denny gazing at his husband and Alan asking him “what” was fun to watch in the show already. But you writing it, it is equally funny. ;-)))

I was pleased to read that he and Vanessa were together for four month…I really can imagine them as a couple for a short time. ;) The same goes for Chelina and Alan…too bad they were never together. :(

This conversation was the hightlight for me:
Denny leaned forward and said, "You and Vanessa Walker had a fling, didn't you?"
"We did. It started the night of the costume party. Remember? I was dressed as Shirley. After our balcony time, I met up with Vanessa and we went out for drinks and a late dinner. We ended up dating for four months."
"Yes, thanks to my new medication, I do remember. She wasn't in a costume."
"Oh, but she was, Denny."
The older man frowned. "No, she wasn't; she was wearing a yellow dress."
"Indeed. A dress she had worn once before and I told her then that it reminded me so much of a beautiful young girl in a yellow dress I went to high school with and was too shy to approach. She wore that dress as a costume for me. I knew I had to have her and even better, I knew Vanessa wanted me to have her and she knew I knew it."
"Don't confuse me. Just tell me all about it. Was she nasty?" Denny asked with a leer.
"I suggest we finish our meal and go home. We can talk there," Alan replied. "And if you don't mind, I will eat my potatoes." ROFL

Their nightcap on the balcony and Alan telling Denny more about Vanessa and his fling with her was awesome…and typically Denny he wanted to know how the sex was. Really cool written ;)

The reason why they stopped dating wasn’t surprising for me…and it shows that Alan only loves one person deeply and this is Denny ;)

Therefore the story has the perfect end: Alan resting his head on Denny’s chest and Denny telling him:
"You were always marriage material. You just needed the right incentive. Denny Crane! Like you told me: We really are the best couple you know." Very well said and I melted.:-)))

Great piece of entertainment…what a joy to read…thanks a lot!