this was great, really loved your version of WCI
your OC's are as great as ever esp Blizzard, favourite bit has to be his Aqua Fang on Big Mom
and poor Aika, she's seen some pretty dark stuff this arc, and to top it off she saw her beloved older brother with such a bad wound, if i had to guess i'd say she's really realising the dangers of being a pirate going up against an Emperor of the Sea, and now they're on their way to Wano to confront yet another Emperor...she's prob scared of seeing more life threatening injures or one of the SHs losing their life period...
before that tho, Reverie and the Trek right? looking forward to reading those as well

Sanji has a point, Luffy's conqueror's haki would've made things a lot easier...but he was too tired to use it so what can you do lol, imo Sanji shouldn't have got blindsided by Yuen so easily, even if he is carrying Luffy
but damn, F for Pekoms, whether he actually got his eyes gouged out or not, they were totally intending to do it, people who Pekoms always thought of as his allies, Big Mom Pirates are absolutely ruthless...

so she's awakened armament haki too huh? pretty sure not even Big Mom could use all 3 types of haki when she was 6... tho she WAS killing giants at 5 instead lol. Still, Aika's quite the little Haki prodigy isn't she haha looking forward to see what you do with her in the future

RIP Pedro
man Aika's observation haki is already something else, she can hear voices like Aisa/Coby and sense emotions like Otohime/Luffy...I've said it before but when this kid grows up she's gonna be so OP lol I suppose at some point you're gonna have Luffy teach her future sight, errr, some time in the future lmao
i can see something like Aika and Kumi vs Flampe happening in Wano, battle of the youngest lol

"I knew this was gonna be a bad idea!" Actually I think it was a brilliant idea, can't believe Luffy thought of that on the spot, kept Big Mom crew distracted for way longer than 3 seconds, ofc Luffy had to cancel out his genius by exposing himself lmao
Blizzard and Morgans lol
Jinbe adding to the distraction in the most badass way possible, paving the way for Brook to come in clutch love it when the Straw Hats work together haha

poor Aika i was against her coming but she's only here cause she wanted to help bring Sanji back to the crew now he's essentially giving up on that, that must hurt loads

at this time we still don't know the full details of how Lola ran away from that marriage and home, but as far as I'm concerned she's an oblivious idiot lol, how could she not tell that Big Mom is pissed at her she grew up in Tottoland she absolutely must have know what Big Mom is like... she's still the MVP of Thriller Bark tho

ayy so Nami will finally be able talk with Blizzard from next chapter? so she's finally awakened her Observation haki huh, about time haha

Gomu Gomu no Cannonball, the most hilarious and at the same time seriously powerful attack in One Piece, if not for Whole Cake Chateau Cracker actually would've prob kept flying till he was out of Tottoland at the least loool
shoutout to Nami for the support play

Poor Pudding, she sure her heart pounds by a statice of the statement regarding 'husband and wife' part. Lol.

Noted: Sorry for not review and continue to read for a while.

I see an error! Brook doesn’t have a tongue cuz he’s a skeleton! Ya should’ve at least put a (?) after the tongue

Good stuff! excellent work!

This has been a very Entertaining, Amusing, Dramatic and Tearful Arc!

I really enjoy your version of One Piece stories with new face's like Blizzard and Aika.

I'm sure the next Arc will be just as good as the others. So until next time!

Good ending to the arc and I’ll be looking forward to how you cover the next arc.

Finally after 2 years this story closes another arc; After all, you deserve a break and see how your other story is.

Let's hope that your story of Trek can make closer the relationship of Luffy and Aika after these events and see if there will be drawings of them.

It does not matter if you're busy or worked with other stories, just one chapter is missing to close this arc.

If we are almost to the great end of this arc and good that in saying "our final chapter" to break the fourth wall.