| Reviews for Mother of the Transformers |
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   zombleangel chapter 17 . 5/19 What a fun chapter. While I was reading I did notice one meispell. in the sentence-... but my mother put me n her class to get an early advancement to a nice college on day. I think you meant one not on. Hope that helps. I cant wait to read the next chapter. |
| zombleangel chapter 16 . 5/16 Amazing chapter. As I was reading one sentence did not make sense- Girls like Julie are do mean people like us. What does the sentence mean? I can not wait for the next chapter. |
| zombleangel chapter 15 . 5/15 Yay, the bots got to meet their classmates. As I was reading I noticed one mispell.- just as che liked should be she liked it. I hope that helps. |
| zombleangel chapter 14 . 5/15 What a fascinating chapter. As I was reading I noticed one misspell- ...one of you is being a bulling or... bulling should be bully, as in being a bully. I hope that helps. I look forward to reading the next chapter. |
| zombleangel chapter 13 . 5/15 What a cute chapter. I did notice two is -spells while reading. 1- sounwave should be soundwave 2- Penny facepalmed and hot into the middle... hot should be hopped into the middle. I hope that helps. |
| zombleangel chapter 12 . 5/3 What a beautiful chapter! Penny created a bond with her children. Oh, my gosh, I am going to cry. I wonder what will happen next. |
| zombleangel chapter 11 . 5/3 What a wonderful chapter. I hope that Penny will be alright. I can't wait to read the next chapter. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/30 This is all just so adorable! |
| zombleangel chapter 10 . 4/19 Oh boy, Izzy, I hope you're ready to take care of the Cybertronian little ones. Good luck. |
| zombleangel chapter 9 . 4/19 Wow, what a chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter. |
| zombleangel chapter 8 . 4/17 What a touching chapter. As I was reading I noticed two misspell, they are : 1) trio saw some more ca3rd driving... ca3rd should be cars 2) Megatron and soundwave waiting for them along wirh ... wirh should be with. I hope that helps. |
| zombleangel chapter 7 . 4/12 what an intense chapter. I wonder what will happen next. As I was reading I noticed two misspells. In the sentence - ... reprimand him in a annoye tone - should be ...him in an annoyed tone. In another sentence, -Both of them covered in different colors of the shelf - of the shelf should be different colors on the shelf. I hope that helps. |
| zombleangel chapter 6 . 4/12 What a fascinating chapter. I wonder what will happen next. |
| zombleangel chapter 5 . 4/12 what an intriguing chapter. As I was reading I noticed one misspell, In the sentence Breakdown had to pay his back a couple of times. pay should be pat. I hope that helps. |
| zombleangel chapter 4 . 4/12 Whoa, cool chapter. I believe Penny is mother material for the bots and cons. |
