This is awesome. It would have made more sense to split the story up into actual chapters seen as you put "chapter one" at the top and it wouldn't be such a long slug of words on a single page but it's an amazing story wither way. The whole Annabeth thing at the beginning kinda makes sense as it would be sort of believable that Luke was her only 1 true love. That along with her being manipulated by chase allows me to sort of get over how heartless you made her. In the end its a fulfilling, happy story that if I'm honest wish had even more to it. The tease of being a new city introduced to the world at the end just crops up a lot of questions and makes me wonder if the divine worlds are going to be revealed as its almost impossible to keep such a secret when your under such a big spotlight. I also wish we could have seen the further progressions of Percy's relationships and purhaps some slightly more mature scenes would have been entertaining.

All in all amazing story that still has more to give if you was ever to return to it.

More!

update

Twenty seven seconds of what

Great story!

This is so fuckin' awesome I love this almost as much as my grandma

Wow this was insane!

I just now realized this story is only chapter long lol

Continue ?

55k words in one chapter. Dang son try shorter chapters because its a bit hard to read 55k words in one go

Update please I have read this 27 times hoping for an update

PLEASE CONTINUE!

Nice story, update please

Fabulous story, update please

I loved the chapter