Reviews for Dire Straits: Comfort
Freya Brookes chapter 1 . 8/2
Let’s be honest, we all wish we had a friend as loyal as toothless.

I asked my bro what he would do if he was toothless and I was hiccup.

he said he would laugh and fly away

Guess I’ll die

R.I.P

:’)
WhenHiccupWrites chapter 1 . 10/17/2019
I absolutely loved this one-shot I just need to correct you with one tiny thing: Hiccup is not a brunette he has auburn hair... just saying... but I loved the story!
Tahlibahli chapter 1 . 9/16/2018
Oh woah! I thought you captured their essences perfectly. No one was OOC. Loved it!
Dragonrider's Fury chapter 1 . 5/23/2018
This was just beautiful. Excellent work! :-D

-ThatGuyWhoAlwaysSignsHisCommentsWithA":-D"
ThePhoenixGhirl chapter 1 . 3/2/2018
This is so beutiful!
bottlecaps chapter 1 . 9/27/2017
So many feels! Thank you! I love the comparisons that you used and the way you laid everything out. One of my favorites forever now!
PutMoneyInThyPurse chapter 1 . 9/24/2017
Okay sd;fasldfkjas;dfkalsjdfa;sdflas;dlfjk;ljk; (SCREAMS)
I read this before I'd seen the ep, and the moment I saw it, I came STRAIGHT HERE. YES YES YES YES YES. I NEED this, we ALL need MORE of this, this episode NEEDED so much comfort and you DELIVER.

"A dragon's soft underside, belly, throat, under his jaw, they weren't just vulnerable, they were sensitive aswell. That fact allowed Toothless to not just feel Hiccup's bodily heat and ... every calm breath he took, interrupted only with the occasional cough, but he could also sense the slight and steady thumping of his much smaller heart within. It worked so much faster than his, though they were only lying there.
It was a comforting sensation to him. There was no surer way of knowing that his other half was still alive and right there with him."
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeee eee eee eee eee Ohhh. "not only vulnerable, but sensitive as well." This made me shiver, physically. D'aw "his much smaller heart..." I love how you show the different ways Toothless reassures himself that his Hiccup is alive. I love this embrace so much and I NEEDED IT SO MUCH, thank you 3

"Toothless' human was quite clever, when he wanted to be at least, so he must've figured out what was wrong as the petting took a slower, more reassuring pace."
LOVE the role reversal - humans always talking about dragons being intelligent and Toothless is assessing Hiccup's state. And AWWW YOUR HICCUP PETTING TOOTHLESS REASSURINGLY EVEN THOUGH HE'S THE ONE WHO ALMOST DIED BECAUSE TOOTHLESS WOULD DIE WITH HIM AND ASD;FALSKDFJA;SDFLJKA;SDFLKJ;SDFL

"To see Hiccup, his other half and soulmate, make peace with his untimely death so easily, to see him smile in such a sad way, realizing that he'd be leaving poor Toothless behind and giving him a wordless goodbye, it was something the Night Fury wouldn't forget anytime soon either."
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww SO MUCH LOVE
"...curled up next to him.
Gratefully soaking his best friend's heated, fiery core that every dragon was naturally born with, a nice change after the freezing cold of the ocean...
He was glad Toothless suggested this. It was warm here at his side. It was comforting, familiar, safe. This was nothing like the cold claws of the watery and iron grave that he almost had the displeasure of calling his own."
Yes. Ohhhhhh. I needed this. I needed it SO MUCH. You're healing me.

"...Shifting ever so gently, he curled up around him, his closest wing acting like a makeshift blanket, tail wrapping around them both.
Completely enveloped in this safety, this kind warmth, Hiccup smiled in his slumber as he sunk deeper and deeper into a dream that would without a doubt take him back up in the sky between the clouds. Toothless quickly followed, allowing the fact that his human was safe and sound by his side sooth him and lull him to sleep."
(SCREAMS) "This safety, this kind warmth" is the best description ever. I needed this so much. SO. MUCH. Please never ever stop writing h/c, I don't get the feels from my own writing and you really give me what I need. Selfish, yeah. SO MUCH LOVE. Thank you forever for this.
Nightfurylover1112 chapter 1 . 8/22/2017
Ahhhh Too sweet, too sweet! That was adorable!
flopy chapter 1 . 8/16/2017
I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED IT! HICCTOOTH FEELS FOOOREEVEEER! your writing is great! your descriptions as well! i hope you can write more about them in the future!
Guy Fawkess chapter 1 . 8/17/2017
sweet story with sweet telling... oneshots usually don't stay in top charts long but doesn't matter if you continue writing in that fandom.