Excuse me.
D already knows about this missing hxc from 3rd yr yes?
Plot hole?

The idea of the story was good but you copied like 90% of your story from the bloody books. Didn't Harry say he was Neville when he wrote in the diary? How did Voldemort know it was him who wrote? Also, the whole 'Harry is the heir of all Hogwarts founders and look, Merlin too' is severely overrated and quite dumb. What value does it bring to a story?

An excellent story so far, I look forward to the next chapter.

Great story. Please update ASAP.

I can tell that you copy and pasted from the book, because there’s a part here that says Harry’s Nimbus 2000 is a prized possession, however it broke in an earlier chapter

Umm... a basilisk is a snake. Snakes don’t have shoulders.

This story pisses me off. It’s a solid premise, and what you write that is actually yours is quite good. However the majority of this so far has been copied word for word from the actual book. From what I can tell you just copied and pasted massive sections of the second book into this, which is a cardinal sin for any writer.

I love it! I'm always a fan for "Fifth House at Hogwarts" fanfics, and this was beautifully executed. I also like how you add in the OC for Harry's pairing – not too little of interaction and not overbearing. The only thing I wish you would've changed is the whole ambush by Gryffindor. I know that they are they favored house but they, especially Ron and Hermione, should've gotten in trouble for doing what they did.

Please do update again soon!

P. S. Have you ever thought about writing a fem! Harry Potter story?

Really good please continue soon

So far I find your harry incredible stupid, dumb and fucking ignorant. delete this shit of a character if he he thinks himself so smart to ignore people when he is warned about dark artifacts and magic.

Really enjoy reading this story! I'm just wondering when the next update will be?

Damn.
I hate that I'm almost caught up
Its soooo good

I hate hermione more than I hate ron. I honestly hope she is not krums date. I hope you have something awful in the works for her

Damn. Well yay. Bye hermione

Why us Hermione acting like such a tool
What thehell
I hope she begins to lose her composure from over use of the time Turner
Harry should beat her in something to make her snap
Ron doesn't matter
Neville however should be acknowledged somehow
Poor boy