What about Happy

What of the Orasion seis and kagura

what about Jellal X Ultear I say they go well together

Tbh the more I like the more stupid it become. Why would you follow the same plot as the original? This Natsu is super OP and he could single handily wipe out one of the three guild of the Balam Alliance. Why would Erza ask him and Gray to come to battle a small dark guild such as Eisenwald? This is so stupid and I drop after chapter 4

Lucy - who you stated her magic feels like curiosity - wants to kill Happy the cat!

So. What about Thundreas? He just, dies in a cave? K.

sugoijack9, you are an absolute jacka**. you need to stop criticizing everything so harshly. this fanfiction, and by extension Fairy Tail as a whole, was not made for the sole purpose of pleasing specifically you. you are not someone whose happiness is what drives strikefreedom10 or Hiro Mashima so if you don't like something, and you can't think of a polite way to say it, like giving constructive criticism, then do is all a favor and kindly shut up.

So far the first 2 chapters are as cheesy as shit

Disappointing to such hidden gem

Its a bummer that Gray boosted even more so when the opponents he killed are Demons and a lot of those still around due to Zeref's action.
For Natsu I think he won't be boosted for sooner since the only times the only dragons he could bathed in their blood is in the Eclipse Gate arc against the dragons from the past.

This is kinda b*llsh*t and even more irritating that Zeref is seemingly harassing his little brother with persistent obstacles.

Either this is Zeref or a new party to come along due to the author interest.
Deliora should be dead but sure likes he gonna be alive here.

Awesome battle

Author, be honest. Are you an idiot!?
Why follow the canon when seriously Natsu SSS-class mage could just burned down the tornado and destroy Erigor already?
F*ck you man. I though I have respect on you but you have to follow the will of nakama over that idiot Hiro Mashima.

You gotta admit that canon of Fairy Tail is all bunch of luck and nakama. I seriously want to punch Hiro Mashima in the face for doing so mediocre to a bunch of potential talented mages.
What the author doing here is an experiment in commenting real life factors instead the stereotype shounen whatever crap.
Natsu, Erza, Gray, Happy and the lots of Fairy Tail and other characters have so much potential than just being hit in a pile of garbage that Hiro Mashima drawn. SERIOUSLY F*CK YOU MAN!

For me this is Fairy Tail that must be. Not that canon b*llsh*t. All but nothing but nakama crap.