update pleaseeeee

updating pleaseee

Damn, this is intriguing!

are you going to be updating this story again or...? really wanna see where this story goes.

I love it so far. can't wait for the next chapter.

love this sooooo much! cannot wait for your next update

This is honestly one of the best Riverdale stories that I’ve read and it only has 2 chapters. Can’t wait for you to post the next chapters!

Oh my goodness I just love this fic please tell me you’ll update it it’s just so good

I can’t wait to read more!

Ohhh, I love you. Even if I started and proceeded to watch Riverdale only because of FP Jones. I am really looking forward to seeing new Betty. Betty under your pen, because you, dear Author, are simple supreme.

loving the story hope to see more soon

Really like the plot so far, I wanna see how this turns out. Please continue !

I love how this story is developing, I cant wait to read more and get to know this new Betty and how she will change the Riverdale that we all know and love. Keep updating XOXO

Decent enough update. Could be longer. It's barely long enough to get a sense of the story, pacing, or action. The chapter could use a bit more internal narration or monologue, the majority of what you wrote is series of single lines on the screen. ;)

I'm loving this intro, and the part with Jughead was a cute interaction! :3