Reviews for Armada Starscream in Remnant
Galvatron27 chapter 5 . 3/17/2018
I actually lost the files to the older chapters so they’re stuck like that.
Galvatron27 chapter 4 . 3/16/2018
That was old stuff I will fix it later.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/13/2018
Grammar and punctuation please!
Galvatron27 chapter 11 . 11/2/2017
Starscream will not reunite with Swindle or other mini-cons because there is no possible plot twist to bring s. I only brought Galvatron, Unicron, and Optimus Prime because Galvatron fell into a Back Hole/ Worm Hole, Unicron and Optimus Prime were last seen in space so they probably ended up like Galvatron did. But Swindle was last seen on Cybertron and Starscream or any Transformers characters can’t power link with mini-cons because they’re either Humans or Faunuses
And your wandering what’s taking me so long 1. I lost interest in this story. 2. I decided to wait until RWBY volume 5 so I know more about everyone’s new or unlocked abilities. And the next chapter will be between late Saturday and Early Sunday.
CT7567Rules chapter 11 . 10/30/2017
the way you write the characters speaking could use a little work, but I like this story. are you going to bring in any other Minicon teams and will Starscream reunite with Swindle?
Dev the snake faunus chapter 11 . 10/13/2017
Good story! Grammer neeeds work, but still good!

This'll be fun to read as it continues on
Galvatron27 chapter 6 . 8/21/2017
And what does A/N mean
Galvatron27 chapter 11 . 8/21/2017
I know some people watched RWBY but I doubt many people had watched Transformers Armada because they not at Netflix, regular TV or even some streaming services because it was in the early 2000's.
GenX567 chapter 1 . 8/20/2017
You open with a A/N? You know you could have put it in the heading of the first chapter right? Also shouldn't it be you know a safe bet people have watched the series first.
Galvatron27 chapter 6 . 8/13/2017
I got Character chapter to know who is who and to prevent confusion of how tall is Faunus Starscream or what their semblance is.
Galvatron27 chapter 5 . 8/13/2017
This is the Unicron trilogy not G1
Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2017
If you want to know how to make it clear who's speaking, here's an example:
'"I am Megatron!", announced the Decepticon leader, pointing his Fusion Cannon at the poor human. And blasting them shortly after without a moment's hesitation.'

This is basic writing stuff, really. You'll see what I mean when you go and read what other people wrote and uploaded here (or even just go read an actual book).
You'll also find that script-form limits you to staying 'on the surface'. This means that, just like in all the shows and movies (except for that one Dune movie that came out in 1984, I think), the thoughts and thought-processes of characters is missing. But that is a universal flaw for shows and movies that can't be worked around unless the writer decides to have the character in question go through a flashback or have another character question his actions later on.

But books? No, books lacking the thoughts of even one (main-)character are just bad. They don't even get a chance on the market. It'd mean that the story isn't too well thought out. Books/FanFiction chapters offer the depth that people want to read/see. Why? It's just not given to us in shows. And that's what readers are here for.
I'd also ask around (with PMs) if anyone is willing to help you out with this, as it has potential. Oh, and unless you have actual plans for Scream's team-mates, I'd omit them when you re-write this.
Also: props if you managed to read the whole thing! And good luck writing.
Galvatron27 chapter 2 . 8/12/2017
Thanks
Brian789 chapter 2 . 8/10/2017
Great job on the story, keep it up man!
Galvatron27 chapter 4 . 8/11/2017
Thanks
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