Reviews for The War is Over |
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rebecca-in-blue chapter 1 . 6/16/2019 This is such a sad, touching take on Steve's funeral. I like that it's told from Charlie's perspective and Diana doesn't show up until almost the end. Her final lines leave me expecting more, though, and all your dialogue tags have periods where there should be commas. |
VeraFenestra chapter 1 . 8/7/2017 The end is slightly bizarre, but I like the anticlimax-of-daily-life feeling that you put into this. |