Reviews for Saiyan Shinobi
Landon Turoski chapter 3 . 8/9
Please update this story
gabelou1991 chapter 3 . 6/8
J'aime beaucoup.
Squall321 chapter 3 . 10/28/2019
We must have more!
SephirothTrueHeartlessAngel chapter 3 . 10/20/2019
interesting...next
HyperA2019 chapter 3 . 7/18/2019
I am looking forward to chapter 4 and I hope Naruto gains ability to enter Super Saiyan.
Pushi19 chapter 1 . 4/6/2019
Update it soon please
Guest chapter 3 . 4/2/2019
Where's the update?
Korin Dragoon chapter 1 . 2/23/2019
Add Fu to the harem please, and maybe Tayuya as another Saiyan.
9 tailed fox rider chapter 3 . 10/24/2018
Please update I love this story and all of ur others so please update
david.teague.3950 chapter 3 . 10/10/2018
I have a few things to say. First the story feels real slow to me. Second I do hope that you plan to update again soon I feel that 5 nearly 6 months is too long for a story to not receive an update. Third may I suggest introducing one alternate character from DBZ or rather a sub character from Dragon Ball Super(no I don't mean any of the Gods of Destruction nor their Angels, even the some of them like Heles, Vados, and Marcarita are rather attractive) see there's this really attractive female android who was introduced in Dragon Ball Fighterz.

Now technically this female, coined Android 21, is a non-canon character however, what if Bulma had found her and managed to fix multiple damages to her. Meaning she no longer had to worry about her desire to the strong into cakes to eat. The problem I foresee with the Naruto-verse is that none of the enemies are truly that powerful to cause problems, Obito and his Monkey Marble of intangibility aside.

Frankly I love OP character stories even OP going on to God-like. Then of course there's things that I feel Masashi Kishimoto discarded for Naruto to learn. Fuin Jutsu could have saved Naruto's back side many times over by creating a Barrier Seal that uses Natural Chakra to cut off the flow of Yin chakra, no Yin, no intangibility from his precious Sharingan. I mean seriously remove that bloody eye and he'll have to actually work for his wins.

Where as with Seals, create a seriously modified Gravity Trap that acts just like the Gravity Machines Bulma and her father built. Two overlapping seals the bottom one multiplies the top by it's corresponding number. Have the bottom at 10 times gravity, while the top goes up to 40 and you have the makings for someone so strong they can break the earth.
rocketaleks chapter 1 . 10/5/2018
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ThunderClaw03 chapter 3 . 9/30/2018
Great job keep it up. Update soon
Marka Ragnos629 chapter 2 . 9/5/2018
Sorry, but I just HAVE to do this!

~Do do do do do~ ~Team Four Star Soooda~
Dragonman110 chapter 3 . 9/4/2018
Please update when your able.
SaurusRock625 chapter 3 . 6/14/2018
I swear if things go TOO far south, they're going to hit Space Mexico!
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