This is such a captivating story. You write so beautifully and your descriptions are lush and vivid. I get the feeling Biancaneve is going to go through quite a character arc. You’ve laid out her character so convincingly. Bianca has spent her whole existence trapped in an echo chamber and her emotional breadth has been completely stultified. To say her true personality has been buried is an understatement. I can’t imagine what if must be like to live for centuries and not have one real true connection with another person. She must be horribly lonely but doesn’t even know what that is. It’s almost painful to read. She has no compassion because it doesn’t exist in her world, and she’s wildly jealous because that’s all she has. Of course, her casual cruelty and elitism somewhat kills my compassion for her, however, I do believe that would change if she experienced the full pain of what she has lost.

I’m very curious to see where you take this. Will Bianca ever learn about her human life? How will Aro react when he finds she’s pulling away? Will she and Aro ever have a true conversation, or has Aro buried himself so much that he no longer exists. Will Bianca ever find that connection she so desperately needs, and how will it change her if she does?

Anyway, I’m anxious to read more of this. I love how you’ve created this flawed, complex character who is so damaged. I’m sure Aro will find out she snuck away because he can read her mind. I get the feeling she is going to become quite angry with him when she finds out what he has truly done to her.

This is so good. Please please keep writing. I want to find out what Bianca discovers and how the Volturi will react to this.

This is getting so good.

You write so well. I love how you have captured the Volturi so perfectly.

Wow, what an intriguing beginning.

Please update soon!

I love this! I always wondered what would happen if one of the higher ups decided to leave the Voulturi.

Fantastic beginning! Thank you so much! I hope you update soon! Love, love, love it!

Oooooohhhhh this is getting good!

Amazing