Great chapter, as always! I think this friendship between Draco and Dudley is so interesting, I hope it possibly gets explored more in future chapters. Keep up the great work!

HELF

Marvellous work! I've really enjoyed both your characterization of Scorpius and of Draco :) Watching Scorpius throw off his family's legacy was marvellous. The only thing that makes me sad (and this is petty) is that you're writing for Ravenclaw XD But oh well. Every team deserves good authors.

All in all, this was a great story. And the color symbolism, with Scorpius putting all the colors in his room- great idea!

This was so great. Fantastically written. Really, really awesome. So specific, and atmospheric, and so much character all in one place! WELL DONE :D

Great chapter! I love your insight into how you see the Malfoy family to act around each other. I can't wait to see how all of these characters interact with each other once they get to Hogwarts! I'm also interested in what houses they'll be in!

HELF

Oh my gosh I love this story. Your writing style is impeccable, your character development is superb, and the story line is flawless. I truly can't wait to see where you're going. Keep up the great work.

HELF

Great start to this story! Your writing style is so intriguing, and I can't wait to see where you go with it. Keep up the great work!

HELF