I relished this fic; took about 2 weeks to finish. I am really growing convinced that Sasuke and Hinata were actually how it was suppose to be and that the creators should have stopped at Shippuden, but alas, that is my opinion on that... I love how you incorporated everything. I really did hurt for awhile (as you hoped) thinking that it was going to end horribly. But it was a satisfactory ending. Thank you for the "poetic Sasuke". Totally worth the read. And now, I'm going to put FLGW as a fave.

I‘m bawling my eyes out at this! Damn it, why do you have to go this route, Master DM-chan? Sasuhina has been nothing but my guilty pleasure for the past years and I think nothing of them before. I know their connection could never be in the canon and they existed only for my entertainment. UNTIL YOU COME CRASHING WITH THIS FANFIC! I’m starting to see more. Maybe, in a way, Sasuke has thought of Hinata as someone odd in the canon, but I’m sad they’re not canon. I’ll just cry in the corner because you did this to me, Master DM.

I really hope there’s a happy ending for them two.

Okay, hold the eff up! Is Sasuke being serious? Does everybody in this review section understand him? Can only virgins understand his motives? Is that why I’m not seeing this shit? (Jk. IT reference intensified) I cannot express how angry I am at him. Like, dude, my dear emo friend, your gorgeous wife is friggin’ pregnant, alright? PREGNANT! You do NOT want to cause her any emotional side effects in her most vulnerable state. Quite the opposite actually, you’re supposed to ASSURE her! At this point, I don’t even bother asking why he didn’t push away that Otsutsuki b*tch. Clearly, he’s trying to distance himself from Hinata, with a mindset plan to make her hate him, in order to save her from whatever. I’ve seen that million times went downhill, so I had to resist the urge to just plunge myself in this fanfic and shout at his face ‘watch Netflix and read ffs! None of your tactics could ever work so get you sorry ass up and friggin’ apologize to your wife, you stupid idiot!’

Kk, I’m done. Love your work, Master DM. New fan here. Please update soon. Two years have passed.

Lovely story so far and I’ve enjoyed reading it

My, my... Sasuke throwing innuendos while dining with the father-in-law. Quite casually at that! I wanna pinch Hanabi’s cheeks—she’s that cute here.

Just found this fic! And I I’m just on chapter 2, and boy , I’m captivated! There’s something about the way you weave the words that pulls on my heartstrings, and I’m only two chapters down. Top notch writing you’ve got here. I sure am sticking to the end.

I was just looking for a good long SasuHina read. I knew i dropped this story before because it's too "poetic" for me. I ran out of SasuHina to read and I gave this a chance. Oh boi, it's more than what I asked for. I never expected this story to tackle The Last saga. I think I only read one SasuHina within that time period. And I'm so glad you kept the Tenseigan, I consider it equal to Rinnegan as they are both evolved version of Byakugan and Sharingan. Really good story and really good rendition of The Last scenes. Please post the epilogue HAHA.

I absolutely love your interview part hahahaha that was entertaining! I love this chapter! Gawd your writing is so good!

this fanfic is too sad/ melancholy. why? because life is short. sasuke spends so much time away which results in time being lost. hinatas life is too lonely. hinata had a terrible childhood so its unfair to her for not getting a warm family, and instead must wait months/ years for the return of a husband.

kakashi's speech was inspiring.

i just wanna say, the majority of girls dont like yaoi because they find feminine guys attractive. you should notice that the uke is usually has feminine charm because he is the girl/ receiver. girls like to see that uke being dominated by the seme who represents the masculine dominant partner in the relationship. girls just wanna see two hot guys go at it which is why gay porn is popular for girls both straight and lesbian and lesbian porn is popular for men( probably only straight men tho). the truth is, most girls are not attracted to feminine guys in a sexual way. a feminine guy can be good looking but the attraction stops there because girls want to feel that they are the female and feminine one. its a huge topic with many possibilities but i felt like trying to explain this point of view because you were probably unsure ?
also, i dont think you made sasuke feminine by having his clothes fall off his shoulder. its just a sexy thing that can look good on anyone. its a seductive act. sasuke has his own masculine charm in his dark brooding nature , etc

Read your story again! Sigh
Please make some more of this! Love love love

I love the way you write. So vivid. So poignant. Pulled my heartstrings, made me cry...such overflowing creativity! Please write some more! Entertain us!

Yeah, maybe prompts would help. That would definitely be refreshing I think. PM or post here anything for SasuHina and BB Rennosuke. Thanks

Guest Lion: Actually, I'm done with the baby scenes and the epilogue. I just couldn't post it. They're lacking in spark, pizzas... something. Warmth? I dunno. Maybe I need help. Help me guys!