hahah cute :)

I like these little sort of AU fics within the MCU, and Homecoming was so fun that there a lot of twists like this that could be done with it! I like the thought of Tony coming to help Peter with Vulture, as I can see it being something that he would do if he were aware of the situation. I like how, despite how Tony came to help Peter, Peter sort of ended up saving Tony. Nice!

Fun little fic :-)

Tori

I really enjoyed this take on the last battle scene. it flowed very nicely with the plot. great job!

Well, hello, there. I, for one, am an author who likes to comment on stories I read. Now, I am currently on mobile and I can never login to my account correctly, but nonetheless I will review.

This one-shot was good. I do suggest putting in a bit more of the setting - even though I've seen the movie a good five times now. It just helps the reader visualize everything in your eyes.

I think that you got the characters pretty good. I like at the beginning how Stark answered the phone but immediately got concerned when Peter could be involved.

Nice job. And, if you do write another story about Spider-Man, or something else I am interested in, I will certainly check the story out and read it.

I would be ecstatic if you could read some of my stories. Totally up to you, but I do have two Spider-Man:Homecoming stories as of now.

Once again, nice job!

~felyD :D

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