I like it so far however I think it would have added a bit more to the story had she not aged and stayed 13 while Kal still made it to earth on time. Having her grow up with the Danvers family with those mental and emotional health issues I think could add a lot more drama. Damn this is giving me ideas for the story of mine that I plan on rewriting.

Kara Zor El: The journey-of-the-Damned
hi
can you please update this story please
thankyou
Lucy

Well,that was unexpected.

Looking forward to the next chapter

Very nice.

:)

I really hope you continue this story it's really good with so many interesting parts. I love the changes made to Kara, especially her apathetic attitude to most things. I really like that she's built a tech company and the changes to her past and I'm looking forward to her meeting Astra. Her reactions with other people that she likes and respects (like kal and cat) are interesting and I look forward to seeing more of her interactions and how she sees people like Lena and possibly lex. I was wondering if general zod would possibly turn up on earth as it might be fun to read about Kara just beating him up. I don't like rao at all and they way he was acting around Kara was creepy and left me feeling sick but I can always read and relevant parts with him in and skip the rest. I'm looking forward to hopefully being able to read more your a great writer and have written a really good story.

Holy snickerdoodles!

Patiently waiting on the next chapter.

Very nice.

WHEW!

very interesting

Looking forward to the next chapter

Very nice.

Interesting Chapter! Looking forward to reading the next!