I stopped at chapter 3 because this story sucks.
I was hoping it would get better but no. It didn't. Aside from the grammatical errors, the pacing of the story is too fast. There is too little exposition, world building and character building.

Overall, this makes the whole story bad for my tastes and it isn't my cup of tea.

please update

I’ve read your story and I must say I like it. I can’t wait to see how Hakaru will play a role in the canon. So please, update it as soon as you can. It would be a shame to have it end like this.

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how dare you leave me like keyboard typing while still reeling from the cliffhanger isn't great for spelling.

how fucking date leave me like thst.

I think u shall...(finish what you were saying) hahaha

What happened to updating?

I need more XD

Get's pushed... gives up food. A true bread shuttle.

did you really have to do the whole "I want to get stronger" cliche?

This chapter is cliché. Orochi said kaka's line and he is same age as itachi isn't he. MC is arrogant, passive. Is he talking or thinking. Why shout in shock, i thought MC is calm type. MC's emotions feel fake.

You said canon then orochi betrayal changed. Why, to pair anko wiexper that's stupid. And Danzo isn't that ignorant if MC really fooled him then that's just stupid. Why kill family, it's really cliché. If his mother is uzumaki and obito or orochi took for experiment or something will stupid, for me. Please take no offense it's just my opinions.

why do you upload and announcement as it's own chapter when you can just put the apology at the start of chapter 5?

good work read it in one shot also oroshimaru was mpore of a pruduct of his time and got fucked by donzo i am saprized he did not go to warwith donzo instead of konahana in general and honstly it would not be that hard o feed heim ideas abought concent and other things