Reviews for Deviant Art |
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laudgm94 chapter 1 . 1/12/2018 Write more PLEASEE! I know this would be a great story :) |
MadasaHatterKNP chapter 1 . 9/18/2017 Please add more to this i love it! Also Hi fellow texan! I hope you and your family were ok during the hurricane. |
RedAce16 chapter 1 . 8/27/2017 Please make this multi chapter! This is really good! I'm loving it! I really hope you keep posting! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2017 Lol this was awesome. :-) Pleaseee make this a multi-chap because i need to know if Maui knew it was him or not because I believe he's not THAT dense...? Why?! Why must you write a good openong and leave is hanging!? Please DON'T turn out to be one of those people who have really good abilities but don't write for years. |
Artistic Ane chapter 1 . 8/6/2017 This was cute, and funny, and I could definitely see more happening here. I hope you continue and expand upon this. Because I'm curious: how could Maui think that Moana's talking about herself (even though technically she kind of is) but not think that HE'S the object of her affections? |
Sunshine-Midnight123 chapter 1 . 7/29/2017 This is really good! Awesome job capturing their emotions! Hopefully more to come! |
les7091 chapter 1 . 7/28/2017 Omg this needs to be more than a one shot |
Enchantress47 chapter 1 . 7/27/2017 Oh my god! Please make another chapter! I would LOVE to see Moana like, make up a name, say, Anthony, and Maui try any go after him, going around to different islands, and asking for 'Anthony' ! |
Wen chapter 1 . 7/27/2017 Very good story, you got the characters down pretty well. Although, I get the feeling that Moana and Maui are in the same boat... Please continue! 3 |
Bamon chapter 1 . 7/24/2017 I'm not logged in right now but I just wanted to say that I really need to read more chapters of this story. Please? |
StarSpinner678 chapter 1 . 7/25/2017 ohmygawd as a one-shot this is fantastic! Instant Fave! As a fan of Older-Moana/Maui, I'd love to see more if you ever decided to write more! *Squee!* I like your writing style in this chapter, it flows nicely, but the ' marks around the italicised thoughts is possibly a little much. It did take me a moment to work out she said it outloud. Other than that, it's well done, and I love the almost-cliffhanger end. Makes a nice touch to a oneshot and invites the reader to read on if it's continued. I shall follow this, just in case :D |
Lilyren chapter 1 . 7/25/2017 I officially say...this definitely needs to be something...how could you leave me hanging on that crumbling cliff?! |
Blackwillow55 chapter 1 . 7/24/2017 Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. OMG please continue this please please T_T wonderfully written and so In character! |