Wow i never expected this turn. I look forward to seeing where it goes. I am just really glad I don't live in Keith's head.

This. Is. Incredible! How. Just HOW! How do you make such a great story? I am in AWE! AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH:)

Bean

That song, Brandy, you're a fine girl or whatever it's called reminds me of Guardians of the Galaxy:)
If you've ever seen the second one you'd get it. Those movies are so good! There's only two tho... so far;)

Bean

Not Keith's mother!Please update soon!

I love this story!Will Lance and Keith gt together?Please update soon!I can't wait for the reunion and for Lance's family to meet the others!

*screeching in the distance*

Lol awesome. Area 51. Can it be a Grey's ship. Like the one from the space mall?

Author Julie, you gave me a heart attack with that last chapter! I have a suspicion that they'll have to go to the Garrison to get a ship, who won't want to give one to them, but one of the lions will come get them instead. :P I would suggest using a colon instead of underscores, or surrounding them with apostrophes, while writing texts though.
Example - Annoying Mullet: 'Hey Lance. You Okay?' - makes it a little cleaner/clearer.
Anyway, keep it up, I can't wait to see how they find each other!

wait what? the end ... there's more please?!

O.O.

digging this alot. get the boys tech fixed! someone in the family has to know some tech.

Keep up the good work!

So cute, but so sad! I would love to read more.

I cried...because of how cringeworthy this was.

I cried because of this.