Reviews for Better Sisters |
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![]() ![]() Hey okz update soon or make a sequel.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story although the lemons could be a bit longer. the last four lines though...hilarious. |
![]() ![]() Great story but the last lines dam I'm dyin |
![]() ![]() Lola and Lana and Lucy and Lisa get involved too then the parents knew the whole time because they knew this would happen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And another great story congrats |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic! You're quite the writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like need more to the story for example what if Lucy knows and wants in or Lisa accidentally makes it to where they all are temporarily super fertile and they all get pregnant |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great story it definitely did the original justice and if you don't mind me making a suggestion for a potential sequel how about one that takes place about five or six years after this one (that way the younger sisters will be a little older) in it the younger sisters with the exception of lily are jealous of the fact that Lincoln spends so much time with the older sisters (not aware of what they're actually doing) and starts to think that he doesn't love them as much so he decides to do for them what Lori and the others did for him but hey you're the expert it was just an idea I had |
![]() ![]() ![]() those last 4 lines |
![]() ![]() ![]() Better sisters needs a sequel. How can I persuade you to write one? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was hot and good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Using a controller, to rob someone of control. I love such small things. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *incerts rim shot at end of story* (also works as a pun ha) |
![]() ![]() I died laughing at the last 4 lines |
![]() ![]() I stop with the fapping but good chapter |