Reviews for Better Sisters
Guest chapter 5 . 8/7/2019
Hey okz update soon or make a sequel..
ZaydenNightshade chapter 5 . 7/2/2019
good story although the lemons could be a bit longer. the last four lines though...hilarious.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/14/2019
Great story but the last lines dam I'm dyin
Guest chapter 5 . 10/15/2018
Lola and Lana and Lucy and Lisa get involved too then the parents knew the whole time because they knew this would happen.
jasongd chapter 5 . 9/17/2018
And another great story congrats
brandonthornton458 chapter 5 . 8/12/2018
Fantastic! You're quite the writer!
Tyrone666 chapter 5 . 7/2/2018
Like need more to the story for example what if Lucy knows and wants in or Lisa accidentally makes it to where they all are temporarily super fertile and they all get pregnant
STR2D3PO chapter 5 . 4/21/2018
This was a great story it definitely did the original justice and if you don't mind me making a suggestion for a potential sequel how about one that takes place about five or six years after this one (that way the younger sisters will be a little older) in it the younger sisters with the exception of lily are jealous of the fact that Lincoln spends so much time with the older sisters (not aware of what they're actually doing) and starts to think that he doesn't love them as much so he decides to do for them what Lori and the others did for him but hey you're the expert it was just an idea I had
harmoniccomic chapter 5 . 2/26/2018
those last 4 lines
Anthem of Grimm chapter 1 . 12/8/2017
Better sisters needs a sequel. How can I persuade you to write one?
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 5 . 11/24/2017
This was hot and good!
painfulldarksoul chapter 2 . 11/9/2017
Using a controller, to rob someone of control. I love such small things.
Midgar9210 chapter 5 . 9/21/2017
*incerts rim shot at end of story* (also works as a pun ha)
Kitten chapter 5 . 8/13/2017
I died laughing at the last 4 lines
King69 chapter 5 . 7/20/2017
I stop with the fapping but good chapter
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