| Reviews for A Better Sister |
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   jasongd chapter 5 . 9/16/2018 And another great story congrats |
| JR32 chapter 3 . 1/22/2018 Bobby knows how wise he is... all it needs was to give Lori motivition on how great a sister to all the Loud siblings... maybe sometimes he knows how great a brother he was to Ronnie Anne and never doubt himself |
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 5 . 11/24/2017 Read the sequel first nit knowing, but this was really good to. |
| Midgar9210 chapter 5 . 9/21/2017 Oh shit you too? Fellow ocd right here brother haha. |
| GennaiArakida-XIV chapter 5 . 7/14/2017 Know this: you have managed to weird me out AND impress me at the same time! |
| AberrantScript chapter 5 . 7/14/2017 Oh gosh, Lori has definitely earned herself an A in being a big sister. I bet she must feel sooo satisfied her and Linc's relationship improved so well. Their special scene was beautiful, very heartfelt, and a perfect ending for this story. |
| ko777 chapter 5 . 7/14/2017 :) nice |
| Melody Thunder chapter 4 . 7/14/2017 Good chapter and please continue |
| ko777 chapter 4 . 7/14/2017 awwwwwwwww |
| AberrantScript chapter 4 . 7/14/2017 I can't help but feel so bad for Lori as eac sister rejects her attempts to spend time with them, and then dinner happened. It was pretty funny, but heartfelt enough I couldn't tease her like Lynn. Her moment with Lincoln was awesome. This story is really starting to take shape. |
| ko777 chapter 3 . 7/13/2017 :) awwwwww like to point lincs 11 loris 18 |
| AberrantScript chapter 3 . 7/13/2017 For starters, I really like how suspicious Lynn is. It's like nothing gets past her bloodhound nose. It's really sweet how Lori is trying to get closer to her siblings, and how Lincoln is trying to "belong" with his family. I'm really curious to see how they'll get from these first steps to that leap subtly hinted at in the summary. |
| cabgrant chapter 2 . 7/13/2017 Lincoln fanticizing about Mrs. Johnson.. Yuck! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/13/2017 An eleven year old boy hasn't reached puberty yet so it would be impossible for lincoln to have an erection |
| BlackButler13 chapter 2 . 7/13/2017 I'm not sure I want to know what happens next but at the same time... please write another chapter! |
