Seems off-character for Zim to hire someone to kill Dib. Zim hates nothing more than he hates Dib, Zim's more the sort who would want to kill Dib himself no matter how many times it backfires on him.

Well I sure didn’t like Zim's end but I guess Dib had to win at some point... Maybe.

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Finished already? Surprising. But, a very nice finale.

The action scenes were great, and I loved how the Huntsman twisted the wording of his and Zim's deal. Also liking the jabs at Gaz, even if nothing more came of it.

My only complaint was the out of nowhere sudden switch to first-person for that one scene. Other than that, great finish.

Keep up the good work.

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LOL, the last line had me laughing so hard, sucks to be Dib right about now.

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Well, now that it's all caught up, here's hoping for more updates either here or on DA.

Anyway, once again, great update. Loved Darth fighting off the Huntsman to save Dib, and the setup for the fight with Zim's monsters.

Though speaking of which, will people actually believe Dib now that they've all seen multiple aliens and monsters in broad daylight?

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

Honestly, if Zim hadn't hired the Huntsman, he'd probably be a good character in my opinion. How odd that the antagonist has some regret of doing what he's doing. Of course, he's doing this for food, but I highly doubt that Dib's actually gonna die in the end. More like that the Huntsman is gonna turn on Zim. That's what I'm thinking is gonna happen.

The Huntsman reminds me a bit of Skulker and like he, the guy will discover that the "prey" will not be an easy challenge.

Also, I'm surprised Sara found out that Zim's an alien.

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Don't remembered if I mentioned this when I reviewed over on DA, but it seems odd that Sara suddenly seems aware that Zim is an alien when confronted by the Hunstman - I mean, yeah, he is, but it still seems like a huge case of "X is true so Y must be too".

Anyway, Dib fighting off the Hunstman was just as much a fun read the second time around as the first.

Keep up the good work.

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I liked this one, I really hope you do another chapter. Keep up the good work :)

Well Dib most certainly will have to battle a lot more than he can chew.

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Already been reviewing this on DA, but I might as well do it here, too.

Great start to a great story. You do a good job of establishing how dangerous the Hunstman is, and his moral problems with his mission. Also, despite me not liking her, Gaz trolling Dib by just popping up like that to mock him is pretty funny.

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.