I'm cool with everything except making Harry a bitch whos afraid of woman I detest shit like that it ends being turned into garbage guy being all ohh I'm so scared of girls the kind of dude who never gets he's dick wet

Good chapter.
Keep on going.

By the way, how would Arturia react if she saw other universes where Mankind expanded beyond the stars and are fighting for survival (like Halo or Mass Effect)?

Good chapter.

Awesome chapter.
Damn, if both MOON and ORT are needed, then whatever happens really is bad.

Good chapter

Awesome chapter

Awesome intro.

I think Lancer Artoria had two scenarios when she choose the lance besides the one Alter followed: she either became a vessel possessed by the Divine Spirit of the Lance (similar to Ishtar using Rin as her vessel) or she managed to hold on to her own self and remain as Artoria. At least, that's how the wiki seems to put it, basically. Rhongomyniad, while possessing Artoria, had empty eyes; while Artoria Lancer, unlike both the godess and Saber counterparts, had eyes full of life when she was King.

Just because Zelretch has pretty much been made Sakuya's personal bitch doesn't mean he would stop trolling people. Just that he'll avoid trolling Sakuya and her mistress (and maybe Arturia). Anyone else is fair game.

The Rabbit of Caerbannog! The absolutely adorable and absolutely terrifying bloody Beast from the great Monty Python. Figures that Zelretch would bring that fluffy demonic menace just for kicks and laughs. Damn trolling bastard of a genius!

who do you think would win a fight primate murder or the rabbit of kerbinog( not sure if I spelled that right, the white rabbit from Monty python and the holy grail that is baby harry's pet in this story.)?

...at first i assumed that bunny was from Monty Python's Quest for the holy grail. but now i cant help but wonder. did you seriously give naruto Primate Murder as a pet?

because that is the ONLY creature i can think of that would have Zelretch that freaked out.

also, terrifying though it is, the monty python bunny would NOT be able to force a mother freaking DRAGON into submitting to it.

high tea to eat? not a meal? not british so a bit confused. i find snacks is equivalent to meals in western countries - spaghetti/

I just realized that that scene with the killer rabbit was sort of making fun of the chestburster scene from Alien and that is hilarious to imagine the rabbit bursting out of someone’s chest like that!

Awesome, update soon.

Great great been a long time