AAAhHHHH I love this! I like reading batim fanfic because, even while the game is still in production, we have enough info to creat our own little story’s. I think Joey would be proud. :)

OH MY FRIKKIN GOD THAT LAST LINE!
My heart dropped. You are EVIL for leaving us on that. But this is amazing!
One critique, or two. We use "..." for dialogue, not '...' - that's generally used for thoughts.
And enter whenever someone new starts talking. It sometimes slips into that.
Other than those, it's amazing! update soon, I wanna see where this goes!

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