Reviews for SOLDIER'S Have A Serious Problem With Sugar
G3r1k chapter 1 . 8/26/2019
Im not sure what this is but i love it.
Minaly22 chapter 27 . 8/12/2019
I was suddenly thinking of a crossover with DungeonMeshi (Delicious in Dungeon) when the part about Cloud using monster meat came up.
Freerunner4427 chapter 26 . 7/28/2019
Not quite what I had in mind, but intensely amusing nonetheless! Great job guys!
Minaly22 chapter 26 . 7/28/2019
Defective roombas with weaponry was absolutely hilarious
Freerunner4427 chapter 25 . 7/22/2019
The complete takeover of the slums was a gradual endeavor. No one really noticed (or just looked the other way) until Don Corneo went missing.

Zack didn’t intend for things to get so out of hand when he strapped that knife to the new office Roomba, honest! How was he supposed to know Scarlet would take it as a challenge?!
oceanwaves101 chapter 25 . 7/22/2019
Another enjoyable chapter. The image of Vincent break dancing has me rolling in laughter. Looking forward to more.
LKturtledove chapter 20 . 2/25/2019
the way you came up with this chapter is hilarious! Really it is! And what you came up with is absolutely amazing! Yeah, I would probably remember everything about an illness no matter what too, if it was the first one to happen to any child i would have.
Freerunner4427 chapter 13 . 2/8/2018
Holy shit, so THAT's how the Choco-Kick Meteors came to be.

Hmm, I wonder how Cloud would react with a double dose of No. 55 now that he's an adult. My god, all of Ultima Services would be turned into a mine feild of pranks and traps!
BlueMoonChaos chapter 5 . 2/8/2018
I would love to see Chocobo!Cloud or Dragon!Cloud! That sounds epic! (Also funny as shit because we all know this version of Cloud would have a blast fucking with everyone.)
Freerunner4427 chapter 17 . 1/24/2018
...one or both of you are Voltron fans. Are the rest of the Voltron gang gonna show up at some point?
BlueMoonChaos chapter 2 . 1/24/2018
Reading this at 1am. Crying and laughing hysterically. And gasping for air that's in short supply. Pretty sure roommate (who's room is across the hall) is traumatized too.
Freerunner4427 chapter 15 . 1/19/2018
You guys leave me in stitches every time you update this story.
Wolfg1rl99 chapter 9 . 1/11/2018
Thank for this! It was really awsome!
naru-chan 92 chapter 12 . 1/3/2018
Always an absolute pleasure when you update!
Shade the Hero chapter 1 . 12/13/2017
The story is good so far and I'm enjoying it, but in a room full of people it's hard to tell who is speaking when you don't say who it is. It made it very confusing and hard to follow, and jokes that would normally be funny end up suffering because of it.

I love the concept and the idea though. :)
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