He turned back to the Lukes, "She deserved better."

Other Luke continued relentlessly, "Well, I'm not arguing with that, since you turned homicidal and cruel and Sithly, but at some point … well, it sounds like at one time Anakin Skywalker was an awesome person. He's not the failure, you are."

Damn, Luke! As if Vader wasn't roasted enough! XD

GOD Bless, Keep Up the Good Work, and Keep Moving Forward! :D Amen! :D

Nice ending

Kinda anti-climactic, but still fun :P Her shielding abilities certainly became handy

Woop woop!

Yay! Han and Leia are so cute together

Aw, I hope Han is reunited with them soon ;P

Oh wow, I enjoyed this as much as tatooine surprise and malintis syndrome! Kudos and I cant believe it took me so long to peruse your other stories, and I will be fixing that shortly.
Thank you for the excellent story, and I particularly like how certain characters and/or themes show up in more than one of your fics :)

"Mwahaha" is typically used to signify evil laughter, fyi. I'm enjoying the story so far, cant wait to see what is next :)

Love this story so far. :) Something jumped out at me as I read. With this particular part of the story not taking place on Cloud City of Bespin, and Luke has lost a hand aboard a Star Destroyer instead, couldn't it be retrieved and reattached? I'm sorry if this manages to throw anything your way that might result in a chapter re-edit. Thanks for such excellent writing. Take care. :)

I love your writingD ！Very logical and readable, the Skywalkers relationship is adorable (put a heart. jpg here) And I’ve learned many new words and points of grammar from it(I take notes while reading, it’s interestingP）Thanks for sharing a lovely storyCan’t wait to read the next!

Because of that princess bride reference I ended up reading the entire thing with that weird lisp. The mental audio of James earl jones saying Wafuwy wedded wife and Wafuwwy wedded husband, was both hysterical and immersion breaking.

A) Wonderful story-I'm currently re-reading it and it is every bit as enjoyable as the first time!
B) Was the bunny-fear in the last chapter an Anyanka reference? Because, if so, Sweet! (Virtual High-Five!) If not...weird.

Im laughing at your authors note because you said this fic would be 12-20 chapters and it ended up being 53 LOL

Very good first chapter. Sometimes I find authors Vader/Luke interactions cringy...but it was very well done. Makes me want to read more

Loved this story it was great! thanks for sharing