Reviews for Cruel Fate
Nicknyte chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
Very fine short story.

I will be honest, this is my first fic I read in 12 years. I think it displays 2B inner struggle to a T. I also like the call out to Weight of the World.

My nitpicks:

The way to spell "YoRHa". That needs a small adjustment.

Also, the proper noun of God vs god. Most times, whenever the singular Abrahamic god is being referenced, it is capitalized. Whenever it is a random one of many possible ones, the lowercase version is applicable, on a grammatical standpoint, not a theological one.

Overall, fantastic story.
gamergirl101 chapter 1 . 6/28/2017
Very sad. Very nice story.