Trunks is an asshole. He made a brother murder his own sister smh what a menace.

That was... crazy... and awesome! I don't even know where to start. But man!

it really isn't Mr. Popo!

good story so far! I was looking for a funny DBZ youtube video but accidentally found DBZ slash. as a straight male, I really enjoy the story! the writing is wery good. I'm rootin' for Krillin mostly lol. dude's gotta get his destruco /dick/ into something fast! will read more later! lol destructo dick. hiLARious.

YAY! I Liked this story soooooo muuuuuuccchhhj...!

Wow ~ and I mean "WOW"...~~

real creative and original..

I've never thought of character death when I first read it..

And the way Trunks and Geta died is totally out of my expectation..

and well..

it's very well written coz usually people will end it up when they reach back to their own world..

but you did mention of the complications and conflict that happened after they're back...

though the frustrating part is that Gohan didn't get like a "happily ever after" feeling.. u know..

I love this character as much as I love Vegeta..

I certainly hope that he gets his happiness...

When I first read the summary.., I was like.."Vegeta & Yamcha"..?

what the..!

but when I actually read on it.., it is surely a lovely story..

I do have a complicated feelings when I read on the story..

sure.., Vegeta & Yamcha's romance is lovely...

but I do love Vegeta x Bulma fanfics greatly...

Therefore I actually thought that the ori Vegeta would love Bulma in his world and Yamcha would bring Geta back..

Well.., all above is just my ranting...p

Wow ~ and I mean "WOW"...~~

real creative and original..

I've never thought of character death when I first read it..

And the way Trunks and Geta died is totally out of my expectation..

and well..

it's very well written coz usually people will end it up when they reach back to their own world..

but you did mention of the complications and conflict that happened after they're back...

though the frustrating part is that Gohan didn't get like a "happily ever after" feeling.. u know..

I love this character as much as I love Vegeta..

I certainly hope that he gets his happiness...

When I first read the summary.., I was like.."Vegeta & Yamcha"..?

what the..!

but when I actually read on it.., it is surely a lovely story..

I do have a complicated feelings when I read on the story..

sure.., Vegeta & Yamcha's romance is lovely...

but I do love Vegeta x Bulma fanfics greatly...

Therefore I actually thought that the ori Vegeta would love Bulma in his world and Yamcha would bring Geta back..

Well.., all above is just my ranting...p

Hi there :) It has been 7 (nearly 8 years) since both of you have finished this story. I don't quite know if you still keep track of the reviews you get for this piece, but even if you don't get this review, I still need to say what an awesome story this was.

I can not even begin to describe how addicted I became to this story and how fast I gobbled it up. I adored the unconventionality of this story; that Piccolo, Yamcha and Krillan were the ones to be sent to another universe and that they were the central characters. That originality got me hooked but the following series of events kept me entranced.

The idea of an evil Goku and Gohan is not one I normally like to read, but the concept fit so well into this story that it was easy to go with the flow. I was not expecting the pairings you two began, (even though it was listed) but now they have me hungering for more. I laughed, I cried and was outright angry during many of these chapters. I loved this story very much, and even though it has been a long time since you two have worked collaboratively I do hope I am able to read another one of your pieces in the future.

Just wanted to say what a wonderful story this was and how thoroughly I enjoyed it :D

That was the most original story I've ever read for the DBZ fandom. I greatly enjoyed reading it.

:D

The story has been done for AGES so I don't usually review after that long but - uh. I've read it for at least three years and at least six times. I dig it.

After chapter 20 or so, the paragraph breaks cease to happen. ): It's all one huge block of text. I was wondering if maybe there was a link or something I could go to where they were separated how they had been? I first read it on your website and there was no big block.

If not, still. Thanks for the awesome fic. It's still a favorite after all these years. :)

Great story. The only mistacke was you forgot Bulla Vegeta's daughter. Please make Vegeta/Yamcha stories.

How can you forget about Bulla?

She should be in the fic.

This was quite honestly one of the best fics I've ever read, made me feel horrible when Trunks died, and an odd, depressing satisfaction when 17 killed Goku. I haven't finished reading the rest of the story, but I love the insertion of Vegeta back in the regular world,I wonder how that's gonna play out. I've been reading the story for about 3 days strait now, after work and school, and I can't wait to see what happens next. You did a great job with this, the story is captivating, and best taken with an appropriate play list of songs.

ah, i've just finished rereading this story for the what, 4th time? god bless you for creating this. i would've loved to have a scene with prince goten meeting this world's less crazy chi-chi. would he have been freaked out? guilty or indifferent? would she have tried to mother him? oh, and i feel so bad for gohan! his enitre world is changing and he has no clue what to do about it. i heard something about a sequel?