Oh, that was weird but lovely. Thank you for writing!

I love it very much. Thank you !

Great ending! Great reading, overall. But not perfect. As mentioned by others also, the developement of the relationshps between the three is rather superficially treated, that's a pity. A number of short conversations, bickering and comfort scenes along the road could have made a difference here. Quite a lot of interesting details are passed by with only a few words, fx the instability of the time spell that tosses them back and forth - the first experience of that must have been quite dramatic. The troll. Hermiones meeting with the basilisk. And the battle - what's going on while they are all under the influence of the Felix Felicis? What happens when the influence fades? And the returning: The spell work and the touchdown in the ministry?

I'm happy enough with what there is. But I feel that perhaps a plot of this quality could have deserved a little more respect from its own master.

But when all is said and all is done: Thank you for writing and sharing!

I won't go so far as to name this story the best I've ever read. I can't help but agree a little bit with uncoconut that the personal relationships, tensions, between Pansy, Daphne and Hermione could have been cultivated a bit more, especially (but not only) in the chapters back in time. But as a whole I think it's a very good story. An exciting and inspiring plot and very well written. Definitely worth the reading time!

Thank you for writing and sharing!

This was completely fucking awesome!

THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR WRITING! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

This was a fantastic read well done

I liked this a lot. Thanks!

It was okay. My expectations were maybe too high since I saw people hype up this fanfic a lot so I gave it a shot. I didn’t really feel a connection between pansy and Hermione and there was a slight sizzle of chemistry between Hermione and Daphne but that’s about it. There’s not a lot of relationship development between them in my opinion.

7.5/10

Ahh I can't. This was one of the best stories I have ever read. The 3 of them together is the greatest thing and I'm so happy you've shared this, thank you.

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Nice, ty

Definitely enjoyed reading this. It really made me smile. Thank you!

This was very clever and lovely

I enjoyed that. I like how you started out in an alternate reality and shifted into canon BECAUSE of the time travel; a twist on the usual. Your ability to maintain in character was also impressive.

Brilliant story! This had me captivated from the first moment to the last. It is a unique take on the old back-in-time troupe and the characters are believable and likeable. Thanks so much for sharing.