This story is very innovative and interesting and I really hope you will have more chapters soon in the future because this story is getting good! Keep up the good work man!

i love that you showed sasukes pain for hinata makes him want to destroy a village but his love for his son stops him. i love the balance and the rawness of this fic. thank you, pls update soon! xx

I'm intrigued. Great beginning. I love the sasuhina pairing. I love your portrayal of Sasuke. Curious as to what happened to Hinata. Would we get to see how their relationship developed? Also interesting who you paired Sakura with. Will she take Sasuke's suggestion? You mentioned you have a hard time writing Sasuke but I think you are doing a great job. Keep writing please! Looking forward to reading more.

I love how much Sasuke loves Hinata in this story. You could almost taste his pain and suffering. Absolutely wonderful.

This is a really lovely piece you got. I really understand why you're slow. Writing is an art form and I think that it's totally understandable. I mean you're literally doing this for free, so no worries. Good luck! Hope to hear from you soon!

OOOoOo interesting start! Love it 3 Want to see where it goes next!

Lovely story so for. Keep it up.

Great to see Hiashi visiting his daughter, even though it was probably more out of duty than affection. At least Ko genuinely cares for her. And her teammates as well. I'm glad they are still involved in Hinata's life, even after she got married. Speaking of which, could you describe how they met? Thanks!

I'm reading this again to refresh my memory and it's even better than before!

Thanks for updating :) I'm really looking forward to it :D Good thing that Hinata didn't lost her memories... and I really love Iroha, maybe we get to read more of him in the next chapters :) And I'm still pissed at Tsunade... oh and Sakura and Kakashi being in a relationship is quiet, not so, shocking... so Naruto will be single?.. I'll just have to find out on later updates :) how old are they anyways?... already am imagining Hinata and Iroha's interaction, just bursting in cuteness... oh my gosh, I just can't wait to read more of this, akd Uchiha family bonding... :)

OMG AMAZING PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! Beautiful love the friendship between kiba and sasuke

OMG AMAAAZING! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP

Give it a rest Is sasuke from hinata or sakura It does not change anything Sasuke would be the same he was leaving long mission And hinata lonely mom raising I think with sasuke in the anime He loved karin She was good and bad np sarada It's a daughter karin sincerely Can not see love sasusaku and sasuhina Both sakura fan girl obsessive hinata love naruto All animo truth pose this Besides the personality Sasuke violent Quiet but asshole To be something like that Sasuke says what to do And she is submissive Sasuke needs someone who Chasten him How do i do wrong Violent personality What does awanture do? husbands Not submission and timidity sasukarin It only sucks it's not like that delayed how sakura

I really not expecting sasuhina to be married and have a son! I hope hinata can recover soon, that traumatic events will surely leave a permanent scar on her mind. I hope sasuke can be patient with hinata, i will be waiting for their family to start reuniting. That was such an ass move from tsunade it's just unfair for sasuke, i freaking hate her at the moment

i agree i find sasuke and hinata. onplement each other beautifully i cannot believe kishimoto did everything in his power for the two not to interact when they have so much in common idk i love love sasuhina but i wouldve accepted at least a few interactions here and there in canon ugh i cannot believe naruto ended with sasusaku happening. like fucking how? there was NO chemistry between the two and the only clue that theyre together is they have a daughter...like why