Omg I came here from Tumblr but started reading on this website yesterday. Love your work.

I love it

I already love this story and I'm only on chapter one! I think it is very well-written, you capture the character's personalities beautifully and throughout this chapter I really got a feel for who they are. I also think that you keep them similar to how they are in the manga/anime, but different because of the new story. Besides that, I noticed nothing in terms of grammar and whatnot, and I would have caught them if I did. If I could change one thing it would be the reiterating certain things. You tend to mention specific details a lot, but I have a feeling it is a stylistic choice or to maintain the mood/tone of the story. With that being said, it really didn't bother me. I'm struggling to come up with some decent constructive criticism for this story; it's good. Thank you for writing this and giving me the opportunity to appreciate something! Have a great day!

Loved it!

I really loooooveeee this fanfiction. It's cute how they interact with eachother 3

The story was interesting and I'm happy about the ending. The only thing that bothered me, I mentioned already before about Lucy's rudeness.

I'm happy they finally talked about everything.

I'm glad she's realizing her mistakes and is now trying to make up for it.

I find Lucy way too OOC. She's friendly to everyone. I can't see her being so rude all the time. I really don't like this Lucy. I understand she's upset with Natsu for beating her in the competition, but she's also mean to him and makes fun of him. She's even doing this to strangers. That's not like her at all. Q.Q

just finished reading this cute story! I loved it! when the girls almost walked in on them, I laughed my ass off. I don't think I disliked anything about this story. It was awesome!

I'm loving your story but you're making me want to punch Lucy in the face for being a rude cow. LOL.

I actually want to just slap Lucy right now. That attitude girl, better check yourself.

I loved this!

I love how this story started but I'm curious on how natsu and Lucy's relationship will develop.

Loved the story...