lol, I couldn't agree more about Ziva creeping me out. The show writers made a trainwreck of almost every character through the years, but none as thoroughly as Ziva. The writing was so strange and inconsistent that I began to see her as bi-polar on the verge of insanity. The awful fact that they continued to dally with the Tiva crap after Boxed In, and worse, after Aliyah, continues to grate even after all
these years. She told Gibbs that Tony was millstone around her neck when she wanted to go on her super special mission in Missionary Position. All of the outright nastiness, only to garner ratings with the idiotic, stomach- turning ending that not only do they have a child between them, but she kept it a secret from him for three years. Yeah. Nothing says love like not trusting Tony to do everything in his power to protect her and their daughter. Ridiculous. And I truly blame the writers, not the actors.

Totally enjoyed, excellent writing...except Tony and Abby?! But I'm not a huge fan of the tv show, and Abby's antics on the show irritate me (I admire her smarts). Tony needs somebody, Abby is loving, it works. Thank you.

I somehow missed this when it was posted, but am really glad I found it now. Really well done! I love the outcomes for all the main players, but especially for Tony and Abby. That pairing really makes sense to me! Thanks for a great read!
Lindy

Thank you for writing this, and more importantly thank you for publishing this for others to enjoy.

Awesome story!

The idea is good, the execution is pretty crappy.

This was good, I really enjoyed it...

Awww so cute why has no one else does this! Awesome job :)

love this just wish it were longer.. :( but all good things must come to an end :( :( will keep watching your fan fiction page for more stories..Maybe a Abbey and Tony with a different spin but still pointed n the same direction with lots of angst too.. maybe a Tony junior

Kinda surprised, kinda not. Great job from start to finish.

Tim's possible redemption and his fall especially the Abby scene, very well done and real.

absolutely, there is no way she should have come back to the team without months of down time and therapy after her captivity.

Love this story! Thanks so much for sharing

Uh, the way you've written Abby here...no way does she seem a good match for Tony. Exactly the opposite, frankly. That came out of left field.

I really, really enjoyed this. I never hated Tim or Ziva their behavoir as well at some points was was a huge turn off. But Kate truly got on my nerves which I'm glad you had Tony mention that. Tony getting respect is something I have always wanted to see, so thank you for this fic.