...Plot twist. Seriously. Why.

one there was a gigantic monster called drew and he was evil and some times nice he sore a girl and he went to go and talk to her and he said MI GOING TO KILL YOU the girl ran as fast as she cud and he saw a other girl and said I LOVE YOU and the girl said I LOVE YOU TOO and they go engaged and after a few months they got marred and the got a house too gather and they lived happily ever after the end

You have no idea how happy you made me when you wrote that Kenshin goes to CONNECTICUT UNIVERSITY! I'm from Connecticut and you just made my day! Thanks!

I honestly think that this chapter is simply means to get rid of Marg and an attempt to get readers to feel sorry for Kenshin. Kaoru has suffered so much under him. Broken promises are things tt forever stays in a persons psyche.. And yet most of the resentment on Kenshin is absolved simply by getting pity through the killing of his fiancée. I hope tt Kaoru would end up with Aoshi. She has dedicated half her life to loving Kenshin, let not the later half be doomed to loving someone who will always love another

I'm not actually sure where to start on this... the fic it self was great, I mean a dream the entire time. I so didn't see that coming, and b/c of that the ending was some what sad. I really did enjoy reading this and I'm glad you managed to complete this for I would of never found it if you didn't

Good story!

wow!great job there!i so love your story...i really read it all til the end!i thank u!

and hey,id be much delighted if you write more...

u have an amazing thought dude!

see ya then!

nice

it was a great story

hi. i enjoyed the whole story, but I have to admit I was a little disappointed at the end... *sigh* I'm more of an AK fan, that's why. Heheh.. But good job for finishing the story. _

wonderful story... kinda sad to find out that aoshi is dead but at least kaoru figured it out and went to see his grave... happy that kenshin & kaoru are together... really liked it... good job... great work...

it's haraheta. And it's Tsuzuku, not Tsuzuko. Ahh, I wonder when Kaoru would meet Aoshi again.

wonderful

wow. aoshi basically created a whole illusion of a new alternate version of her life for her. whoa! loved it!

dang that is one twist...all this time Karou had gone into the past or something...hmm interesting

OK. First off, i gotta say this is truly a great story. the idea was fresh, original and kept within the true ages. i like the way the characters developed and that Kaoru and Kenshin were confused about their feelings but eventually just went along with it.

Unlike everyone else, however, i don't think the ending was that great. it's like Marge's death and role in Kenshin's life was an utter lie and as was Aoshi. All he was was a lonely ghost, meaning he and Kaoru only met in a DREAM! i'm also sorry the he's never gonna experience true love and has to live - i mean, unlive, undead(?) whatever - a one-sided one.

despite the big deal you made of SoujiroXMisao at first, you didn't mention much of them after. Sano and Megumi neither.

well,overall,good thing going on here. anyone know how to delete a story from MY Favorites?

Ja Ne! :D :)

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