the plots great but you oc will be labeled has a garry stue thats bad hek Kikue can only have two devil fruit power that it both are good and he also feels like self insrult they also frowned apon by peolpe it also feels like Tyrell has no flows dose he have any? Kikuke flaw is alot of things one is being not knawlgebel about the world that flaw shows most of the others but still good plot.

the only compalnt is you oc