Great chapter! I am very glad that you updated because it had been a while and I was afraid that you would stop without finishing the story. I can't wait for the action of the next chapter

Since you don’t have a lot of reviews, let me help you. The story is great and I really hope you update as soon as possible.

Sorry, I have been really busy this semester! I'm going to try to write and update more often.

Thanks for the correction! I will fix it later on today, after class. I've always thought she was more suited for Bolin rather than Mako.

Love this chapter so far you did a really good job. Just one little thing to fix first it says they are completing against the Buzzard Wasps, then half way through the match it changes to Boarcupines (not surr if thats the correct spelling but you know what I mean). Otherwise great story so far, I was always mad how she broke Bolin's heart like that in the original, really glad she's giving him a chance in this.
Sincerely,
Guano haha

Ugh! The adorable feels that happen at the end of Chap 1