The idea and plot was perfect. Naruto and Madara founding Konoha makes me smile. Naruto just being awesome ia always great. He also managed to prevent many canon chaos. Loved this. Write on!

P.S. you had a few sleeping, word use, or grammer errors here and there. But you did get better with each chapter. So keep up the practice.

Very well written lemon. I enjoyed it more than I imagined.

A from me

i love it so much.

I feel like this story could be great but I just can’t get past all the grammatical errors. The speech pattern is very off, almost as if English is not the first language of the person who wrote this. If that is so please get a beta.

who else is having Déjá vu of the most popular girls in school in the 'who the fuck are you' scene

what will happen to the konoha 11 and the future as well as tsunade

Now I'm curious about what happened with the future after the changes

What about the Uzumaki clan or are they all still on the island of Uzu?

This is just a hunch, but the scene with the statue makes me think that you have watched doctor who.
The angels, which touch you to steal your current life span but send you into the past.
I find it very interesting.
Good job.

really good.
so zetsu and that bastard of hashirama are dead. good.

Give a warniing before posting.

i like the idea its just hard to read with all the bad spelling i suggest reading over before posting

really good chapter.
the bet and make out were fun. Lol, greedy naruto was serious when he told that he would claim his right part of money tajima does on naruto back.
So look hashirama make his move against madara.
but ask why he is so obsessed about madara, thks naruto, they barely talk more than few minutes.
can't wait to see what will happen.

didn't expected senju join konoha, but naruto is right about keeping ennemy close.
And finally the kiss happened, cute