where is it at

Hope you finish the rewrite, Mabui is such an underrated girl

I really wish you would update this or post the rewrite of it. This is a very interesting story.

Any chance that you'll be posting the story soon. This story was really good and I would like to know how it ends

Why isn’t the rewrite posted

he walked right into that one

I was going to yell at you to Finish this, but the I saw the authors note, so I went to check you profile, but now, I'm going to tucking yell at you FOR NOT HAVING THE REWRITE POSTED!

Doesn’t Naruto just need the chakra of Indra’s reincarnation, not the Sharingan? He would only unlock it at the end of his life though, if even that since Madara only lived that long because of the Gedo Mazo, unless some outside interference happened, or he got one of Madara’s from Nagato somehow

I hope this gets rewritten soon

hope to see rewrite soon. also, can u pls post as a new chapter here news when u publish your rework

You know bro, i need more KUMO in my life.

My one and only advice to you for the rewrite is going to be: make sure it doesn't take Naruto so many chapters until he gets to Kumo. Like, at this point I'm starting to question if the title and/or the summary has anything to do with the real story, at all... There are WAAAYY too many conversations between Hokage and Kakashi, Hokage and Itachi, Kakashi and Itachi and so on. What you need to realize is that this is not a original work, this is a fanfiction. You don't need to explain us everything, especially not something as well known as what happened before/during/after Uchiha Massacre.

Also, why is Naruto crying so many goddamn times. Like, I understand that he lost his most precious person, I really do, but he already cried for him for several times, did he really need to cry again just because Hinata the Coward told him to cry for him? He cried when Shisui gave him his eye, he cried with Itachi, he cried in the hospital room, he cried the whole night with Kakashi holding him now he cries with Hinata holding him as well? Who's next? Ayame and Teuchi? And then Iruka after them? Then he will go to Kumo and cry again once he is alone there. And then once again when Mabui ask him what happened and tells him to cry. Once again when Raikage and B asks him as well. God help me stay calm during all that shit, seriously.

sigh... anyway, don't take this as a flame. I am just frustrated that such a good fic is ruined because of 2 simple mistakes someone as talented as you should've easily avoided. Looking forwards to the rewrite

Just change the aspect of kumo being where he lives. It seems really stupid that the leaf would let Naruto live in Kumo with him being one of the only uchiha left. How about have Naruto like he is in cannon (related to Minato and Kushina) but he receives the Sharingan from Shisui and he meets Mabui when he travels with Jiraiya and falls in love with her then.

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Called it...knew this was gonna happen the second I got the email of the update, it always happens...