Pfft, ‘in a few days’ huh? Gotta say though, I do like that summary, so if I gotta wait for a story that actually looks pretty good based on summary alone, then so be it.
Can’t wait for the 1st chapter.
~Ryan

gotta do ino

Are you okay? Are you still here? I hope you are okay, and haven't forgotten this fanfiction you were going to make. Get better, and I hope you be fine. Also, I can't wait to see this fanfiction of yours beomes published and available.

From: Mysterious Storm

Continúen la historia

It's Shaak Ti not Shak'Ti. Interesting start can't wait for you to post a chapter.

so what happened to the few days?

55 is completely right, and pointless bashing is immature. Why don't think up another for the while your because that's not Naruto. Another thing why does he need to god-like that boring. Sorry, but this story looks like crap man.

waiting for your update

Please update soon!

When will you update this story? I want to see how this all begin, and how the stories going to end. It's just so exciting! Though, please don't make him too much of an overkill. I want to see him learn new things, adapt to his surrounding, and also prove everyone who wronged him, that he is the greatest, and make them taste their own medicine. All in all, make the story in YOUR own image. Just don't make it an overkill.
You Rock!

O_O i want this!

Padmé Amidala , Mother Hinata , Sara , Ryuzetsu , Karui , Sasame , Amaru , Sen

Okay, there are WAY to many cliches in your story. First off, naruto being a genius and having the sharingan are both incredibly cliche and completely take away from the reason naruto was so great and loved as a character; his dedication to hard work and pushing himself harder than most is why naruto is so inspirational and why his rise to godlike levels was so amazing. I feel like if you take that aspect away your still will simply have an oc with narutos' name rather than naruto. Second, the harem is just too much. Ive seen plenty of stories with harems this big and they end in one of two ways: one, is the author tries to focus on narutos' relationships and because their are so many women the plot gets lost and the stories falls apart. Two, only a few women get some character development and the others barely get talked about or fall to the way side because the author forgot about them. In other words you either get a failed smut story or you get a failed plot driven/proper character development story; either way its not good. For this reason just stick with a single pairing so that you can easily make both the plot and pairing coexist in harmony.

Third, the hate and revenge, whats the point? Hes gone from the planet and wont see them again unless he chooses to or the elemental nations gains access to space travel; in which case, considering what happened to him, stopping them from having any influence in the galaxy would make sense. Fourth, 10 masters is just unnecessary. No need to make him a god at the beginning of the story, develop narutos' character and skills to "godlike" levels over time and he can do that with less than 10 masters; he did it in the series with less than haft that so why not in your story?

Listen, don't just throw stuff in because it sounds good, look at what you want and ask your self if you can do all that and have a good plot, have proper character development, and can you do all that while pacing the story properly; if you can't do all those things then take things out or add things in to do so.

How about Darth Talon, Darth Maladi, Mariss Brood, Bo-Katan, Karui, Konan, Darth Zannah, Ventress, Koyuki, Karin Uzumaki, Shizuka, Temari, Shion, Mei, Oc Kaguya clan member, Kaguya herself, Mito brought back to life, Rin brought back to life, Hera, Sabine, Jyn Erso, Padme, and a female Anakin Skywalker and to everyone else don't say this makes you cringe because it was done before

The girls for harem: Bo-Katen Kryze, Ayume, Mei, Kurotsuchi, Sing(bounty hunter from SWtCW), Ventress, Lagos, Soniee, Ino, other bijuus(female, including zero tails), Mina Bonteri, Karin, Tayuya, Kin, Hanabi(you said NO Sakura or Hinata.), Hitomi, Fūka, Fuu, Yugito, Yugao, Tsume(Kiba overthrows her, and the only things she has is her companion, and her daughter.), Zygerrian Queen(Possily), Fem. Itachi, Fem. members of Akustki, Rig Nema, TenTen, Fem. Neji, Fem. Lee, Fem. Gai, Numa(when she's older, about between teen and adult), fem. Jinchuurikies, Shizune, Shizuka, Kyouki, Hotaru, Samui, Karui, Mei, Tsunade, Fem. Jiraiya(female twin), Fem. Orochimaru(female twin), Temari, Amaru, Mabui, Ryuuzetsu, Shion, Shizuku, Susuki(different, female one), Momiji(both, one from Tanzuka, the other from the Land of Vegetables), Fubuki Kakuyoku, Fugai, Seramu, Sāra(and her daughter), Fem. Shishui. That's all I can think of. What you do with all of the girls I mention is up to you. If the people who posts what they think likes them, they can use them for their stories. If you or anyone else wants o add more, go or it. All in all, it's up to you, with how you do in ou story. Pease!