I do not see why you gave Artyom the big gay in this story. It is not a part of his character, unless the glucose-man himself changed that in 2035, which I have yet to read. Other than that, I enjoyed the story. Your writing style is quite good.

Wow, I haven't been on here in a long time...

This is a fantastic story, and I am truly impressed by the way you are able to capture and portray a very Russian mentality. Harshness and grit in spirit, brotherhood among comrades and survival through any means are as true here as they are even today.
Personally, my favorite aspect of the story is the setup and format, weaving the dreams and the reality together to drive Artyom towards his goal.

I can't wait to see how this will progress! Excellent work!

Amazing fourth chapter. I loved it so much! So freaking awesome have no words again lol. Can't wait for more. Keep up the good work!

Wow...just wow. I really have no words with how amazing this is. How Fantastic and emotional and deep this story is. I can not wait to read more and see how this story develops

Goddamn amazing. Keep up the good work!