Reviews for Pokemon Loud Version - Kanto
Patrick chapter 21 . 7/8
Can you do a chapter based on Pokémon Mewtwo Strikes Back Evolution. I want Lincoln to be in a Pokémon Movie. Please
FireOx97 chapter 34 . 7/2
Your story is so good it has inspired me to write a story of a similar nature, only I want to use the Alola region as a basis for Lincoln's Journey. I hope that is okay with you and I hope you update soon as I really want to read the rest of your story
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28
Please Update soon I want to know what happens next. Pretty please
HisAwesomenessR chapter 24 . 6/19
Clyde's got have Squirtle. It's the obvious choice for someone as prepared, smart, kind, supportive as him.

Ronnie Anne, I'm not so sure, maybe a Machop or Bulbasaur
magicianofthecosmos chapter 34 . 6/14
Magikarp's moves include Splash, Flail, Tackle, Hydro Pump, Bounce, Celebrate, and Happy Hour. As for Magikarp's nickname, maybe something along the lines of Typhoon?
Guest chapter 22 . 5/14
Lincoln is a beta cuck that just bends over and accepts what his family did to him. Forgiving his siblings is one thing. But forgiving his mother just Iike that is total bs.

It’s sad that this story has been completely ruin at least on the Neglect aspect of it.

If you love neglect drama then don’t waste your time reading this story. It is a complete let down.
Guest chapter 18 . 5/14
Only a week has passed?! I am just now realizing that. I’m sure the time table has been explain before. The author put way to much plot in a short time frame. There is no way Lincoln could have realistically done half, if not anything, he has accomplished in a week. Even a couple of months would be pushing things but it would be at least believable.
Guest chapter 34 . 5/14
The story is a harem, sigh. I get it, you have no experience with woman, especially young woman irl. But you don’t have to be a loser in your own fantasy. That’s the one place you get to be a winner.

Since you have ZERO experience and knowledge of woman I’ll give you some info. Woman, especially young woman/girls would NEVER consent to be in a harem. What you see in pornography isn’t real. While some woman will engage in sexual promiscuity that doesn’t mean they will enter into a relationship like a harem.
You may find some weird cultists or desperate woman in irl who have no choice. But by and large any self respecting normal woman would never agree to be in a harem nor would their families allow it.

Don’t be a freak, creep or weirdo in your own fantasy stories. If you are normal there, it might bleed into irl.
nderek597 chapter 34 . 4/8
swift swim and rattled.
And I like to name him ray!
E-man24 chapter 1 . 3/20
This story is going good. Will Lincoln have to choose between Ronnie Anne or Misty? Hoping no one decide to add the Coronavirus in next chapter, because it will ruin the excitement, and the Pokemon.
Crossoverlover242 chapter 34 . 3/18
Thank you for continuing the story, most people would just stop making chapters, so thank you for continuing the story. I also want to help out with the story, well i want an oc of mine to be added in here. If that's no big deal.
Guest chapter 34 . 3/16
UPDATE!... ...nah just kidding nice fic ;)
KRUSA1 chapter 34 . 3/14
Have you seen this YouTube channel called pallet university it features a professor bringing science into the Pokémon world including a mini-series where he gives the gen one Pokémon a scientific name
alexthe8t chapter 10 . 3/10
Porygon Porygon 2 AND Porygon-Z
alexthe8t chapter 4 . 3/10
Pikachu Charizard Gengar Gyarados Umbreon Fearow and the one in the distance is Arceus
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