Reviews for The Black Game of Life and Death |
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Guest chapter 1 . 4/30 What is this garbage? |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2019 Oh, maybe Harry can find a way to heal them and start a Harem! |
nyx-p1e chapter 1 . 12/11/2018 Wow, a very hard-hitting, tough first chapter. Definitely setting the game of thrones mood rather than a Harry Potter one! Looking forward to seeing where you take the story though! Hope you get the time and inspiration to update soon! :D |
OmniPowerOfKrieg chapter 1 . 10/20/2018 Well, goddamn, great chapter and I hope you make him an utter badass after he deals with all those death eaters and betrayers, like letting them live without punishment would be a crime, but making them live the rest of their lives in suffering with nothing would be perfect. I feel like most MC in a crossover situation don't try to develop new useful skills or perfect their own, ward, rune, enchanting magic seems pretty useful to me and learning martial arts and use of many weapons too just saying. |
Ataxius chapter 1 . 10/11/2018 One person asks for Harry to be paired with a male and you have to change the summary on a year old story to address them. Overreaction much? |
Separ chapter 1 . 10/10/2018 If he has Tom in his head, can't he make some silver legs for Luna? |
kent-jensen chapter 1 . 10/9/2018 more plz |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2018 Nice |
D72 chapter 1 . 10/8/2018 Read your profile, you're eight chapters in default now. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2018 Huh? Is this a rewrite? and please don't make luna an all knowing seer, I love her just as the odd little girl luna, she's more likeable that way.. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2018 It's amusing how you have to tell the readers that Harry is straight and how your author's note seems out of place. I just kept scrolling down scanning and trying to skip all the cliche and add-ons that somehow doesn't deviate the story much from cannon only to arrive at the bottom feeling cheated of my time. I regret ignoring the red flags and reading this story. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2018 11,000 words for a prologue is tiresome to read. i kept wondering when will the story in your summary will start. |
Charles Ceaser chapter 1 . 10/8/2018 Awesome chapter. Please update soon. |
Hexal chapter 1 . 10/6/2018 I could see fixing thir problems with telepathy and like a bat sonar for tonks and something like worntails arm for lunas legs |
Hit1903 chapter 1 . 10/4/2018 and there were many inconsistencies in there. useless and lengthy back story too |